WHOA. Awesome chapter. :D It was a great re-transition back into writing this fantastic story. AND THE JUNIOR THING AT THE BEGINNING. I CANNOT. Hahahahahaha. So perfect. I'll update as soon as I can. :D
Hahahahahahahahahahahaha. Oh, dear lord. That chapter was SO STINKIN' HILARIOUS! Hahahahaha. Eva's reaction to her dad's porn stash: perfect. And it was totally spot-on that she'd get, like, drunk after a single drink. She would have even if Junior hadn't spiked it with vodka.
AND YESSS! Junior is so awesome. I love him. Hahahahahahahahahaha. In short, this chapter was just overall amazingness. So very well done. :D
Look! Look, we have another commenter! :'D And dude... Like woah... Even though I already knew, but still! Those beans are flying all over the place! ;P Oh Grape-Head... Get yo shit together! <3
Pfft. Thanks for leaving me to write what you didn't want to. :p But yeah, the chapter was awesome. Who knew Junior was gay? Certainly not me. Or Eva, apparently. Heh heh. That was sweet of Jez to cover for him. Of course, it helped that it ticked off that cop something awful.
And Figgins is a buttmunch. Whyyyy would he have to involve the police? I do not know. Whatever. :p Now I shall message you about next chapter's plot ideas! WOO!
Holy. Fuck. What did my computer just do to me..? D': I swear, I had this long ass comment filled with ranting joy and praise and and and... now it's gone.. :'/ It was beautiful, and amazing, and might have resembled fangirl tendencies, but I could be wrong... So generally: That was fucking awesome. Bravo, bravo, bravissima! Shit. I mean, holy fucking actual shit. What the fucking fudgenugget shitfaced midget? I literally cannot wait to write the next chapter. I'm gearing up for that riiiight now. Geehee! :3
AW! Jez was so mean to Eva... :'( That must have been embarrassing. But I feel badly for Jez, with all the crap that's going on in her life. And all the drama! Amazing chapter.
:C This chapter made me sad. Although I can see where both of them are coming from. But I'm hoping they'll kiss and make up (not literally, unless they wanna) LOL. Great update, hope to read more soon!
Okay, so I only got to chapter four because I'm in school and the bell is soon going to ring. But I'm going to catch up on this later. :) I love it so far! Both Jez and Eva are awesome characters and I aboslutely love how different they are. Yay. Both of you guys are amazing writers, so I knew I wouldn't be disappointed. ;)
Oooh...I can FEEL the drama brewing up now. Especially because Jez just saw Eva truly standing up to her. Whoop. Glee-ness is sinking into the story more, as well. :D
Sonofabitch! That was full of epic epicness of which was epictacular. =3 I loved the song coice, it fit perfectly! (That, and I just so happen to love Avril. You know, before she got poppy...) And damn! Eva got some balls! I'm so proud. =3 Sonofa- Jez saw it..? Shit's goin' down. Way wasy down. Or up. You know, to hit the fan. =P Either way! The fun begins now. =) <3 <3.... =)
Aww. They fought. :( That's sad. I hope they make up soon! But Eva was just trying to look out for Jez...she had good intentions! Maybe calling her out in the middle of the cafeteria was too much...but we all make mistakes. Even perfect Eva.