Wow. I honestly didn't expect her to be dead. Great. Job. Your Score: 10/10 Originality (Is your storyline original?) 10/10 Correct Grammar/Spelling 9/10 Compatiblity with the song (Does the plotline fit with your song of choice?) 10/10 Appropriateness (Does it follow the rules?) 9/10 Character Development (Do your characters stay the same throughout the story?) 9/10 Flow (Do you use transitions?) 10/10 Format (Does it stay consistant throughout?) 9/10 Layout (Is your font easy to read?)