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  • chemical romantics.

    chemical romantics. (210)

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    I'll begin by telling you the layout is beautiful, because it gets hard now. This was so cute. You two obviously share a wonderful relationship, friendly or not, but it's beautiful to experience from an outside point of view. There's a lovely dynamic in all of these Josh-related pieces that just make me smile. You have to, it's too great not to. You mention all the little things that you really do pick up when you're becoming closer to people too - the special little things. This is so heartwarming to read.

    Please do more of these, you write them so brilliantly. Real smiles, right now. :) <3
    May 1st, 2011 at 02:59am
  • Teddi Manni

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    This was absolutly beautiful! When I was reading it and I kind of got to the end I was thinking "This girl is so good, this must have actually happened!" And I suppose it did. I can tell you really love and care about Josh and you two seem the perfect type with the 'you're independent' and 'he's laid back' that way you have a chance to show people you can take them on HAHA. I can relate to that :)

    The detail is stunning and there wasn't a single flaw in this story, honestly. I think i'ma go check out some of your other works.

    Wow, this Josh-kid is lucky. Make sure he knows that.
    April 26th, 2011 at 02:13am
  • WTFMusicPerson

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    again I say awwwww lol :] I understand what you mean about awkward situations that involve that's what she said... lol.

    very real and simply just nice. It's also nice to know I'm not the only one who writes stories about their lover boy.
    April 26th, 2011 at 01:57am
  • tiffany danielle

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    I feel awful because I was so happy for you while reading this I had to stop reading, cry a little bit, then pick right back up. I felt awful about that because a lovely piece like this should get nothing but smiles - it was too cute not to get millions. :)

    Really, you did an amazing job on this. Not once did I get bored while reading this. It wasn't some unrealistic babble of cliche, stereotypical, love sap - no, not at all. It was so realisitc and heartfelt it made my heart swell up and explode into butterflies. This was adorable and really reminds me of why love is so special. You may not be in love with this boy - it's not my place to say either way, aha - but still, these feelings you're expressing here remind me of ones I used to have when I was in love. It's incredibly heartwarming and just beautiful.<33

    Amazing. <3 :)
    March 13th, 2011 at 10:08pm
  • colorful language

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    This is so adorable, it made me smile the whole time I was reading it :)

    I love the way you worded this entire thing, and how easy it seems to be for you to admit your feelings for this boy. He sounds like a total sweetheart. I like how you make the comparisons between the two of you and how he seems to be helping you in "taking the leap of faith." Your writing is just, wow, it's just flawless. I really loved this :3

    I'm glad I got to take it's comment virginity<3
    March 6th, 2011 at 05:15pm