The Only Hope For Me... - Comments

EphemeralPleasures (100)

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I like it. You should try being more descriptive, though. Instead of just putting out what happened, you could express how it made Frankie feel in more depth than it scared him. It could just be more, y'know? Becausee I know your definitely capable of it. And it'll lengthen your stories. :] Anyway, good frikkin' job. I totally can't wait for the next chapter, love. <3

March 19th, 2011 at 02:54am

OH EM GEE it's jamie (100)

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:D i can't wait till the next chapter! i love it so far. (:

March 9th, 2011 at 10:50pm

floraXXXfauna (100)

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im liking it so far. sound like its gunna be cute :)

March 8th, 2011 at 07:29pm

Savior of Gallifrey (100)

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Love it. You should keep going with it!

March 6th, 2011 at 09:16pm