Kingdom by the Sea - Comments

NOOOO YOU CAN'T LEAVE. THIS IS AMAZING. YOU MUST CONTINUE. <3

Oh. My. Gosh. Why do you have to leave it at a place like this?

Ugh. I'm so worried about them; so I can't wait to see what happens, even if it's going to make me cry. But Ita-chan has admitted his feelings. Even if he was kind of a jerk about it by saying something about keeping him up and "that must be it" and whatever.

I'm sounding stupid. But I think you MIGHT know what I mean.

Regardless, I'm addicted. I can't wait to see what happens next! :)

<3 god your making me cry like a baby your story so emotional absolutely love love love it pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaseeeeeee dont let itatchi and hiname die let them be together they deserve it if they both or one dies il lbe devastated xD

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!

UPDATE!

Several weeks ago, granted, but I've been so absorbed in FanFiction.Net that I'd been ignoring my poor, poor Mibba.

I loved the update; Ita-chan cares! And Hinamei definitely cares about him, but we knew that already.

He has to be aliveeee!!!

Ahem.

I love this so much, so update when you can :)

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Oh, look! This is what you call an update, children! Very rare, and very, very much appreciated.

XD

I really loved the information about Yukio's past, though I wish it wasn't quite as sad. And the discussion between Sasuke and Hinamei was really good, but I just feel like she should have slipped up and let him know who she was. Just 'cause I'm a sucker for reunions. But I understand that it couldn't be done, so...yeah.

I'm addicted. I love it soooo much :)

I smiled so wide seeing another chapter. Thank you for the second update! Glad today was a good Sunday. (:

N'who. Good chapter. The entire talk between Sasuke and Hinamei, I was screaming in my head, "Just tell him who you are, woman!" It's too bad she didn't/couldn't. I'm surprised Itachi hasn't found them yet though. Assuming he's finally begun to chase after her that is. (I do remember him being fairly calm --or are the words overly confident?-- about the matter when Hinamei and Yukio first left.) I'm beginning to wonder if he'll be angrier with each day that passes without them too. *suddenly imagines furious Itachi with deep black circles under his eyes* What a stressed guy. OTL

Speaking of stress, Yukio too! What a story that kid has. Him and Hinamei are a lot alike! And then the whole scared-for-his-life-because-Itachi-and-Kisame-scare-the-crap-outta-him aspect of it all as well. I feel bad for him. I even forgot he was still beaten up until he had to have his bandages changed, lol!

Lastly, short writing commendation: I loved the line written after Hinamei began to cry on the porch of Itachi's and Sasuke's old home: "...she hoped the world heard her". It just seems like a kind of feeling a lot of people have but, surprisingly, is never written about. It was nice to read finally.

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HOLY SHITAKE MUSHROOMS!!!

I spazzed out when I saw that you had updated, so you don't need an excuse. And the encounters with Sasuke and Kakashi, oh my gosh! I was so nervous that Sasuke was going to recognize her but granted, he was what, five at the time? So maybe not. I almost wish that Sasuke did recognize her, though. WAAAAAH! I really want to know what's next.

I have a feeling Itachi's gonna come back for them soon. And I don't want them to kill Yukio, so please don't let it happen. Haha.

Thanks so much for updating! I'm still just as hooked on this story as I have been from the start :)

Until next time! I love this :)

No excuse needed, at least you updated. (:

So, apparently I still love this because I started freaking out somewhere near the end with Kakashi and Sasuke and all that. I'm so curious to see what happens next! (As always, of course.) I will admit I was surprised Sasuke didn't react with this dark shock or whatever once he saw Hinamei, but... I guess there can be a number of reasons for that. (Too many reasons I've come up with for myself to actually say them all here. Which really, when I think about it, makes me even more curious!)

Anywho. Thank you for the update! It makes me feel as if you haven't forgotten about your readers. (:

Feel better - I still love this. Still just as addicted to it as I used to be. :)

I hope you get your computer problems sorted out soon, because I really want to see how Hinamei reacts to Sasuke being alive after her initial shock-pushing-her-to-madness thing. And I will reiterate something I said a long time ago - I really like Yukio. He seems so bratty but he's really a good guy. And why is he in danger? That's something I would really like to know, too.

And then, there's Ita-chan. Is he going to try to take Hinamei back again? But he can't take her to her death. He still has a heart, right? Weeellll....maybe not. XD

Anyway, I can't wait for more. Love it :)

YEEES! :D She finally made it to Konoha and learned that Sasuke's alive! This is awesome, thank you for going to so much trouble to get this out! It's freaking fantastic! <3

mygod i was wondering when you would bring him into the story poor hiname or however its spelled i love this story its my fave absolutely and100 percent

mygod i was wondering when you would bring him into the story poor hiname or however its spelled i love this story its my fave absolutely and100 percent

OMG PLEASE WITH STRAWBERRY-KIWI SNAPPLE ON TOP!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE UR SLOWLY KILLIN' ME WITH THE SUSPENSE FOR WHAT IS ABOUT TO HAPPEN NEXT!!!!! srry for all the caps but i need to express my desperation to and others how your story has put me on a hook!!!!! i cant get enough!!! xD please update soon :3

right now, all your fans are Hinamei, loving you, waiting desperatley for you to prove you love us back by UPDATING THIS STORY. You Itachi you.......

UPDATE PLEASE SWEET MERCY.

I love this soooo much!

And you're not the only geek. I watched the Glee season finale (even though I haven't seen a single episode since like, December...oops? lol). I was soooooo mad. lol XD but Kurt and I-can't-remember-his-name-but-he's-Harry-in-A-Very-Potter-Musical are so adorable!

Anywho, what kinda motivational words are you looking for? "This is stupendous, m'dear, keep it up" or "Bloody Brilliant!" or, "Pip, pip, cheerio!" (or however it goes), or something like you're doing fantastic and I love it and you need to update soon 'cause I'm really worried now. :)

Love this story!!!

Yeah! Stop being such a weenie, Itachi! So, great chapter! Lots of plot, easy to get lost in, but I think I followed it alright! :D Woo, thanks for updating!

I love this story SO MUCH!!! :)
Itachi needs to just stop denying it and accept it. haha.
I can't wait for the next chapter because THIS STORY IS AMAZING!!! :)

Oh. My. Gosh.

Ita-chan, lying to yourself won't get you anywhere! He doesn't know why he couldn't kill her - that's bullshit. I know and you know and everyone reading it knows! Is he really that oblivious? (I like to think that I'm thinking of the right reason he couldn't kill her XD).

Anywho, I really love this story. Really. I can't wait to see what happens next!!! :)