The More You Chase It - Comments

I read this all in one shot. Oh my goodness. I love this, I love this. I freaking love this. It's beautifully written. I love every character. I need to sleep, but this is beautiful. I really want to read the squeal tonight, but alas, I cannot. I might be able to get through the first chapter, but I'm dying here. There has to be a light at the end of the tunnel for Daisy and James.

Just read this all in one go. You are fucking amazing. My favourite chapter, even though I absolutely loved them all, was "Everyone Is Just Fine." Honestly, my heart was dying. When she started talking about how she wanted the morning to go, I could picture it perfectly and wanted that to happen so bad, but at the same time the way you wrote it was just awkward perfect. The two chapters made a great beginning. I loved them, they were so believable and cute. So yeah, thought I'd leave you a longish comment because you deserve it because this is amazing and I'd mad excited to start reading the sequel!

I seriously adored every word of this story
And stayed up until now...which is about 1:30 AM because I couldn't stop reading
It has to be one of my favorites
And I'm definitely going to read the sequel which I'm super ecstatic about

I really hope they both pull their heads from their asses and get together
Okay I'm done, the anticipation for the sequel is too much to bare

And you should also know that your an amaaaaazing writer

Miyuh

Seriously, this story is so amazing! Love it! Sequel, sequel!

there needs to be sequel! haha :D
love it!

so i realized that mibba likes to screw with me and not send me update emails as regularly as they shud.
i just HAPPENED to see this while looking at the stories main page, went and checked my email saw i had recieved NO email and opened up your story to see you had updated 3 or 4 times since i had last read! almost had a heart attack on the spot!
so, anyways. I loved these past chapters- as sad as they were. Please do a sequel (maybe James goes to London and they happen to run into eachother?) please please pleaseeee
i'd say update. but unfortunately i can't ):
loved it!

I love it!! A sequel would be absolutely amazing! :)

SEQUEL TIME 224346456546546!
please! :]

I really can't wait to see where this goes with The last chapter and then with the sequel!!!!

Im in love with your story :]

oy vey! no! have them date! have them fall in love! have them fix this! <3 they are so adorable they can't change! updateeee

oy vey! no! have them date! have them fall in love! have them fix this! <3 they are so adorable they can't change! updateeee

just freaking spazzed that was beautiful
i loved it
please update soon
pleasesesaesessplease

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YOU CAN'T LEAVE THAT LIKE THAT CLIFFHANGER! WHAT HAS THIS WORLD COME TO?!?!?!
update update update im inlove with this story! please update

This is officially my new favorite story on mibba, no lie. I cant wait until the next chapter!

More more more! haha
I love it so much! :)

More more more! haha
I love it so much! :)

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE <3 pleaseee

This is SO good! I love James Franco and your style of writing is excellent! So different from all the writers on here so in love with their subject that they stumble over their words. Please keep it up, I'm subscribed to it I love it so much. :]