Masquerade - Comments

Aw!
LOL I know somone named Neil

This is really sweet. It all seems a bit fluffy, but then right at the end, you kind of took the wind right out of me, you know? I like that you never said what happened to Neil, you left that up to us, we get to decide if he died or if he simply moved away. I like that you chose such a fleeting moment for her to remember because that's what happens most of them time, there's just one little thing that sticks out to us about a person and even if it had very little to do with our relationship, it's what you think of when you think of that person. This was really realistic and a great idea for a drabble because you can give me just the right amount of information that makes things harder to understand but also avoids the problem of wordiness. Great job!