I loved this story, now I'm off to read the sequel.
December 23rd, 2011 at 10:11pm
Prom Queen - Comments
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OH MY FREAKING GOSH. I CAN NOT BELIEVE CARTER CHEATED AFTER PROPOSING AND SHE JUST HAD HIS TWINS. HE ON SOME STUFF. hope there is a sequel coming soon.April 6th, 2011 at 06:18am
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hahah thanks!March 23rd, 2011 at 03:30am
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I'm in love with the story, and I don't listent to Lil Wayne either, but I like it!March 23rd, 2011 at 03:21am
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I really like the plot. The whole idea of this story even though I'm half way through chapter 3. A few things I've ran to trouble with
1 for links use bbcoding [url=put direct link here] the title of the link like fatmia's outfit then make sure you close it with this [/url] the title will be highlighted I use this code for pictures and websites for an example go to my profile and then to my stories click falling in reverse and select the chapter Akward I believe its ch15. Anyway, I like to put my links in the authors notes so i'm not gonna torcure you with reading the chapter just scroll to the bottom and click on the highlighted words.
2 slang is good to use exspecially when someones is speaking but not when narrating. Like 'fatmia was going through the channels' not thro or thru. Dont forget the ' in ain't
3 you change point of view alot. Used to do the same thing but now I just use all knowing narrator
=] hmm, I think thats it for now.
I like this story, even though I dont even listen to lil wayne lolMarch 14th, 2011 at 02:18pm -
this story is amazin soooooooo far i love itMarch 14th, 2011 at 07:28am
