Like! O: I've not read much twilight fanfiction an I saw this and thought ' oh what the heck' and gave it a shot. I like it, and I just finished reading the chapters you have up. I would have to say its pretty nice. :)
i love your character, and how she's the complete opoosite of bella. i feel bad for her though, because i feel like Charlie doesn't love her as much as he does bella, like she doesn't belong. Can't wait for you to update, keep up the good work!
I seriously don't know how Deena can be so happy go lucky. Or stand for people making her feel unwanted, how she can actually still wear a smile! Wow that's either real talent or real weakness but I like her lol I wonder if she will get imprinted on! That would be awsome!