Warning…You’re Mine - Comments

Fuck, I love this! You have to update.

oh wow i love this story i hope that you can update it again soon.

please update soon so good

LOVE IT !!!!!

I'd love to read this story, but can you make paragraphs. It's soooo much easyer to read!
Thanks, Can't wait to begin reading the story. :)

About time they fucked, lol.
I'm shocked that Helena's first test has to deal with Lacey.
Its gonna be a rough one.

This is a good story. However, you need to space out your paragraphs like so:

I sighed pushing my perfect boyfriend, Mitch, away from me quickly.

''Stop.'' I said through gritted teeth.

''Helly, we've dated for three years now. Don't you think it's time?" he huffed placing his large palms on my small hips.

''No...I'm not ready for that kind of thing, Mitch, STOP IT.'' I hissed tugging away from him.

''Baby, don't you trust me.'' he sighed pushing me between the counter and his amazing body.

''It's not that I don't trust you, Mitch....I just....I'm not ready for sex yet.'' I blushed sighing shakely.

''Oh...honey...your twenty now....that's something you say when your sixteen or...or seventeen.'' he chuckled softly kissing my forehead before grabbing my face within his hands tenderly. I chuckled softly thinking how stupid I must sound, twenty years old and still not sure about sex.

''Your right....it's pretty funny.'' I giggled hugging him.
''I'll think about it.'' I smiled as he put our foreheads together. ''I love you, Helena Jane.''

When a new character is speaking you need to make it a new paragraph.

When is Helena gonna actually hook up with Shadows?!
Matt is a cruel man... What a tease, lol

God! I fucking loved that chapter! Reading how Shadows knocked Mitch the fuck out was great and well deserved!
Can't wait for the next chapter, dear!

Hey, you sexy bitch. ;) write more or I will have to personally go to your house and kick your ass :D

P.s....i stole your story's comment virginity....hehehe...and ya can't have it back...!!! :D

I love this story...its plot is freaking awesome and the chapters are long enough for me to dive in and not be upset when im cut short at the good part...i must say it is one of the most original and crazy epic matt sander fan-fiction i ever read and i cant wait for the next chapter...!!! i uber love her her name and how feisty she is....plz update soon...!!! ^_^