Promise Anything - Comments

I'm really fond of this layout :)

Anyway, back to the story. Your grammar is, as always, spot on, as is your spelling. The way you describe these guys, how they act and even what they're feeling - from their moments of doubt to those moments before they stop thinking altogether, never fails to amaze me.
There are so many authors, even those who are published, who don't pull it off as smoothly as you do, in my opinion.

At this point, though, on a completely random sidenote, I gotta say that I probably won't be able to ever see these band members in real life with any female. Not sure if seeing them with guys will be enough since I'm so used to the pairing of Ryan and Brendon. Haha...you've ruined me D;

{original point coming to an end}
<3 Good job

I'm not into slash, got nothing against it, but this was hot. i loved the way it was written & I liked the just correct amount of BDSM you used. It was great! We all know Ryan likes it! Why deny it?!?!? Hahahahhaha!

This is for the comment swap, and to be honest in most situations I wouldb't read this.
But I still enjoyed the story and writng and I think you have clear knowlege as to who your characters are, personality wise. I liked the layout, the banner espescially, and it definatley suits the story. Your descriptions are great too, it was like being there and everything is really realistic (:

All in all, this was great!

Perfect lay out I'm starting to see you have a nack for that. You also really like these Brendon and Ryan people.

Your attention to detail and imagery is much greater here. And much more fluid than before which makes this a very smooth read where all the pieces fit together quite nicely.

I think you developed the characters attitudes more here through their actions and it really highlights each other and makes it believable. I also like when Brendon's attitude becomes more warm at the end than it was through out. Very descriptive, fluid, believable, and over all just nice had elements of a good one shot/drabble type story. (for comment swap)

It makes sense.
I really liked this, I'm not really into boyXboy (even considering my contest) but I enjoyed this.
Thanks for entering, by the way.
I'm growing on Male love, this just helped a lot.
I like what you did with the picture, the colors are great and it was easy to read.

"He smiled as Ryan's screams and moans echoed off the walls, a pornographic lullaby in acoustic."

I really liked this line, the detail is impeccable.

Written for a contest.
Not what I intended, but I like it.
Does it make sense?

xoxox
-Dru