Wow I've spent the past 2 days reading this series! And I love it, I've got to admit the first one if my favourite however I love all of them! I love the way you write and how distinct the characters are, I've got no idea if you are still writing this anymore but I really hope so! I'm going to read your other stories now as well
Oh, and I simply adore Liv's resemblance to Paul. However, the Livs are really too much and line of annoying. Olive,Oliver, Liz, and isn't there an Olivia? Overkill, I say! It's so disturbing that Paul is a grandpa...>.<
Marine? Marine? DID I JUST SEE THE WORD MARINE?! OMGGGGG!!!! (ahem, I'm a bit of a Marine fanatic) awesoooooome! I just started a story called Semper Fidelis, to fuel my obsession. Do you know any marines? Tell me what u think of the story eeeee!
D'aww I love this story and I missed it! Hmm well I like the length of the chapter that you just updated, but I'm not complaining either way as long as you update! :D