Give Me All Your Poison. - Comments

  • Sibbiesibsib

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    Aww yay! thet togther and LOL Frank has what i have,,,, just not ending up in hospital yet :P im on pills :( boo hoo! now one cares about mmy story anyway :D your is awesoem and AWww aand pretty please more XD
    May 30th, 2011 at 05:23am
  • Musicisthesavior

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    my god... i think that this is the ONLY fanfiction that brings me to tears every time... keep writing plz!!!!
    May 30th, 2011 at 03:24am
  • bringmeyourbullets

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    Oh god i'm in love with this storyX_X
    May 30th, 2011 at 03:11am
  • Delilah_Diane

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    Yeah so I'm married to this story now oapsjfnfnslxmx
    May 30th, 2011 at 02:56am
  • violet vixen.

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    That was writhing the wait! honestly!
    I love this story <3
    Frank is finally getting back to his old self and I liked how bob was sneaky and told Frank about the plan! Classic!!
    I can't wait to see how Gee rescues his damsel in distress!!!
    xox
    May 22nd, 2011 at 11:26pm
  • all time perv.

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    I fucking melteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed in this update.
    [I'm glad Ray wasn't anywhere near those cupcakes! poor cupcake... RIP, sweet cupcake! xDDD]
    I FUCKING LOVED THIS.
    I can't wait for more :3
    «3 xo
    May 20th, 2011 at 12:56am
  • baysway

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    Love this story! So glad Gerard is home and Brendon is gone and Frank is staying at the Way house and just everything is falling in to place! YAY!!!!!
    May 19th, 2011 at 07:34am
  • AlishaNicole

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    thank you so so much!!
    this story is my new obsession.
    i cannot wait to read about Frank and Gerard getting back together.

    more soon please?

    xoalisha
    May 19th, 2011 at 06:58am
  • Sibbiesibsib

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    aww hope they get together soon. and good luck :D you will be fine yay. more please
    May 19th, 2011 at 05:35am
  • bringmeyourbullets

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    I love this story!! i spazzed when i saw this was updated haha yay faster updates:D
    May 19th, 2011 at 04:55am
  • Delilah_Diane

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    YEAHHHH AN UPDATE!! can I marry this story? Yes? Okay!
    May 19th, 2011 at 01:15am
  • Frank_Iero

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    god this is so good. and i'm happy the first meeting between Gerard and frank wasn't all weird and awkward. i really hope it doesn't take them long to be together again because they really are perfect for each other.
    May 19th, 2011 at 01:07am
  • Just.a.Kid

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    =] I love this story, I actually almost cried... It's really beautiful <3
    May 18th, 2011 at 11:26pm
  • purplekilljoy

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    you've got me so emotionally hooked onto this that i was getting nervous and excited for gerard to show up...as if i was actually there...
    May 18th, 2011 at 11:09pm
  • DryIce.

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    Right now Frank is curled up in an arm chair, his jacket sleeves are pulled up over his hands, he’s picking with his protruding fingertips at a cupcake but none of it is going anywhere near his mouth. He saved me, he doesn’t know it but the entire time I was getting clean the one thing in my mind was him, the one ambition was to get clean so I could get him back, now it’s my turn to save him.

    Oh my fuck. I was nearly in tears because of that paragraph. It was just... Beautiful you know?
    Bravo baby, so happy that you are my co-write :D <33
    xxx
    May 18th, 2011 at 10:38pm
  • Weezze

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    Liking the new layout.

    Ooooh, chapter thirteen almost made me cry, nicely done. At the end you asked about what us readers thought about the Mikey/Bob situation, and I like how they obviously like each other but that Pete, despite not being in the picture, is standing between them.

    I liked this bit from chapter 15 ‘lifting one to my mouth a lighter appeared in front of my face. Lighting my cigarette from the phantom flame.’ I also like how Bob showed his idea of a surprise party for Frank to Mikey by using his phone, it’s something me and my friends have done a few times.

    In chapter 16, I like the bit about ‘self measured double vodka and coke,’ made me smile, remembering my friends ‘double vodka and coke.’

    There was the odd grammar mistake e.g. ‘were’ instead of ‘we’re’ in chapter 18, but nothing mager.

    Loved the ‘fun’ in chapter 18, it really entertained me.

    Gerard’s point of view in chapter 19 was fantastic, written really well.

    Brendon you bastard!

    The last two chapters were amazing, can’t wait to read more.
    May 16th, 2011 at 02:55pm
  • purplekilljoy

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    i don't know how you did it but you got me emotionally attached to the characters. seriously, good stuff. just ummm, get gerard and frank back together pleeeeeease
    May 12th, 2011 at 10:48pm
  • loripextra

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    Omg I am so happy Mikey stayed with Bob, seriously.
    I can't wait to read Mikey's plan and Frank and Gerard back together, omg please update soon :3 xoxo
    May 8th, 2011 at 03:20pm
  • ForgottenJoker

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    Where's the update, Hun? ;) Need it.
    May 1st, 2011 at 10:31am
  • SexyDork17

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    I screaming my litle heart out right now... I just caught up
    (last time I read this it was chapter 15) and I want to kill
    fucking Brendon!!! That little asshole!!! Gee needs to
    come back and everything has to be settled once and for
    all! But on your part, you have done your role perfectly!
    You have the most amazing chapters ever because they
    have the good stuff! The happy go lucky shit with the
    "This needs to be fixed" cliffhanger shit!!! :D You are
    truely god's gift to this site!!! I can't help, but be totally
    absorbed when I read this story! So update soon or
    else I'm going to start crying, NO bawling! OH! And
    what the hell Pete, you managed to attempt to ruin
    3, NO 4 relationships at one. Yours and Alicia's, Bob
    and Mikey's, Frank's and Brendon's(though it's not
    THAT bad), and the friendship/family relationship
    between Mikey, Gee, Bob, and Frank!!! Though the
    Frank and Brendon relationship part is more on Brendon
    for lying to you BUT still, did you have to go to the Way
    household?!? Just go! Hahaha lol sorry I'm yelling at
    your characters but that's how good you are, you
    make them come to life and seem real!!! Anyways,
    until next time... BYE!!!

    xoxo
    <3Anita
    April 30th, 2011 at 10:47pm