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  • Painted Bones.

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    Oooooh, the kidnapper's name is relieved :o
    Poor Christian :( But yay for Jude for telling her :D He could have been like "Christian? He went on a looooong vacation. So it's just me...And you...And this sparkling grapejuice...."
    May 9th, 2011 at 07:27pm
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    Chapter 19[/b
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    With my mom at work, we'd have the house to ourselves for the afternoon.

    I am still picturing this Christian I love, okay? I know this isn't meant to be mushy or anything, but I'm all feeling like a giggly child for some reason. So Kendall's mom is kinda sorta an alcoholic? Not, like, full-on, though.

    So shocked/full of curiosity right now:
    Your son has been adopted. It's taken care of like I promised it would be. Now you don't have to see us anymore. My daughter will never know you. Goodbye.

    This is just for right now. I'm going to read the rest and leave one comment, because I realized we're not allowed to leave too many comments at once, are we?
    May 9th, 2011 at 02:13am
  • NothinNNomore

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    I swear it gets better with every chapter.
    I think I love you O.o lol in a totally readertowardsauthor kind of way.
    May 9th, 2011 at 01:16am
  • Painted Bones.

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    Awwwh, Jared's dead? That sucks :/ It was an awesome chapter though :) very deep
    May 9th, 2011 at 12:56am
  • OctoberA7X

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    Wow this was great!! I wish my boyfriends did what christian did!! Any way loved it and thanks for the heads up about the update and please do it next time :) Florence still rocks! Now and forever…
    May 9th, 2011 at 12:44am
  • Oceanid.

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    Christian's back! :D I like that he's protecting her and how he kinda shielded her from her mom. Her mother is a big meanie and I hope something bad happens to her mother since she treated Kendall that way.

    Good update. :)
    May 8th, 2011 at 02:49am
  • NothinNNomore

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    her mom is a bitch
    May 6th, 2011 at 03:14am
  • Painted Bones.

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    I almost always say something along the lines of 'awesome update', and I always mean it, yeah, but this was just...

    This was great.

    Poor Kendall :(
    May 5th, 2011 at 09:54pm
  • NothinNNomore

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    Holy shit that's creepy.
    May 3rd, 2011 at 09:22pm
  • OctoberA7X

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    :)…need I say more? Awesome and intense chapter…keep us all updated!!!!!
    May 2nd, 2011 at 10:47pm
  • MixMatch

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    Mind-fucked.
    May 2nd, 2011 at 10:12pm
  • Painted Bones.

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    holy goodness, I'd be pissed if I was Kendall.
    May 2nd, 2011 at 10:03pm
  • Painted Bones.

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    Ah, I love a good cemetery scene (sorry if that sounded creepy.)
    As for the crow, I don't know o_o but crows scare me.
    April 30th, 2011 at 07:53am
  • NothinNNomore

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    Aww, Jude is so sweet and adorable.
    April 30th, 2011 at 06:17am
  • Oceanid.

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    Aww... I like Kendall and Jude somewhat being together. :)

    The second caw of the crow? Well, I think crows are bad omens so... maybe something is gonna happen next?
    April 30th, 2011 at 04:05am
  • OctoberA7X

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    Thus is so awesome and Jude is cool and he reminds me of my boyfriend but I like Christian better…and by the way I love Florence + the machine too :)
    April 30th, 2011 at 03:55am
  • Oceanid.

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    Okay, I officially like Jude now. He's so sweet and cute. :)

    I wonder if Jared'll be alright?
    April 28th, 2011 at 02:02am
  • Painted Bones.

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    Jude's sweet, no nearly as shady as I first decided he was :)
    April 28th, 2011 at 01:50am
  • NothinNNomore

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    Aww
    April 28th, 2011 at 12:56am
  • NothinNNomore

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    Oooh. New character :D
    April 27th, 2011 at 04:24am
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