Equivalent Exchange - Comments

Ah, yes. This was a sad chapter, but I can't help but to feel that everything was caused by someone. The mother was wounded and Mayumi and Sapphire never ran into their father. Where was he if not in the house? Was he the cause of everything?

Hm....I wonder. Update soon, please. XD. This was an awesome chapter and once I read it, it was like I never stopped reading from day one.

Something lost, nothing gained?
Is that when the girls get together for that 'thing' and it goes bad?
When will they, you know, get to their age and out of pastlies?
Damn I'm so excited!

Holy shiznits!
*Drops down to knees and throws hands up in the air.*
"Don't do this to me! I need more!"
*Hangs head in sadness, but then gets back up and does the superman pose.*
Oh yeah, that chapter was Ah-Ma-Zuh-Zing!!!
I absolutely love it!

Oh and I so totally stole your comment's v-card~

Okay, I just have to get one thing out of the way real quick like.

AHA!! HOLY MOTHER MARY AND JOSEPH!!! *Runs around in a circle screaming about the story!*
I FRUCKING LOVE IT!!! YES I SAID FRUCKING AND IN F-R-U--OH YOU GET THE POINT!!!!

*Sighs and takes a deep breath to calm down.*
Now, down to business.
Our character summaries...I've read them and the the chapter. It kind of seems to me, just to point this out, that the personalities are switched. From Mayumi being the outgoing one to being the serious kind of one. To Sapphire being the shy to one's self to being out of control hyper mode.
Just saying, but I still absolutely love them!!!
Mea seems so sweet and caring and I can't wait to learn more about her. Does her body and spirit stay behind the gate or is she going to be like Al and have just her soul around?
Mea would have to be bound to something right, since her character info says she likes Jean....Just wondering.
Hm, let me see if I'm missing something, oh right.
Your layout frucking rocks!!!
Yea, I used that word again, but it's the truth.
*Purses lips.*
"Axel-chan."
*Tackles Axel-chan to the ground and hugs the life out of her.*
"I frucking love you so much right now!"
*Leans back in awe and Axel-chan's ghostly form raises from her body.*
"Noooo!"
*Grabs hold of the swishy tale part of her ghostly form and shoves it down her body's throat.*
"Wake up! Don't you dare go into the light. You still have more to write."
Ya know, even after all this, I was still able to rhyme. Oh.....weird.
Haha.
~Reena