For the Love of Music! - Comments

yay!!!!! its great but you kinda went from second person to first person and then back to second person. confused me but great story and chapter. i hate writers block but you feel so much better when u come out of it :) stay strong.

Great chapter!! Shannon is all sickly!! Everything he says sounds like its coming from a five year old to his mom when he's home from school with the flu! haha ^_^ I can't wait for you to update; until then...

I squealed with delight on the bus when I started reading and I knew what was going on. Thanks a lot and I'm happy to help. When I read story, ideas just come to me and they seem great for the story. Chapter was great and I can't wait to read more!! ^_^
I have no decent ideas right now. :/

This great! I screamed "NOOOOOO!!!!" when Eva said she was going to leave. Eva could leaving and Tomo will catch up to her and convince her to just spend the day with him. Just friend time you know? Then during that time he could remind her that Jared can be very jealous especially with Shannon having something for her(that's why Shannon tells Eva he loves her). Tomo convinces her to go back to the bus and sort things out with the Letos. And by then Jared will feel like a complete idiot and Shannon will feel like shit(because he is sick and he is a cause in Eva's temporary absence).

Just a random idea that came to me.

haha "Eva Rawr" I like that! :D
Everybody should have names like that for each other! hahaha XD
Great chapter, can't wait to read more!! ^_^

Great story! I can't wait to read more! Update soon! Please? ^_^