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  • fireworks991

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    @ Psychokitty13
    Sorry to say like I said in the other one I am not writing anymore.
    October 25th, 2012 at 06:26am
  • Psychokitty13

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    Please update again!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
    September 6th, 2012 at 09:11pm
  • hachie

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    She is finally apart of the Angel Family!!!!
    Matt and the entire Avenged Family were there to support her and congratulate her from her accomplishments!
    I bet her boyfriend will be jealous when he sees the papers about Sparrow and Matt.
    Well that's if he has time to look at a the magazine.
    It was adorable how Sparrow blushed when Cadence ratted her out about Sparrow bragging about Matt all the time!
    I cannot wait for the next update!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    August 22nd, 2011 at 03:45am
  • anywherebuthere.

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    but i love it all the same
    August 22nd, 2011 at 12:33am
  • anywherebuthere.

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    ummm i think you posted a chapter more than oncee.....
    August 22nd, 2011 at 12:32am
  • XxWishxOnxAxStarxX

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    Great story i love it.
    July 20th, 2011 at 04:15am
  • hachie

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    Wow her "boyfriend" is one jackass!
    I mean this is her debut and he says he can't make it because of the movie schedule????
    And they he hesitant kinda of makes things fishy.
    He could have at least take come time out for her because he knows how much this means to Sparrow.
    Maybe she can ask Matt and the guys to be there to support her when Seth can't.
    At least she is really making an effect not to put herself down and keeps looking and thinking positive.
    She has a lot of friends at the modeling agency, doesn't she.
    I very much look forward to the next update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    May 25th, 2011 at 06:02am
  • hachie

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    Aw both Sparrow and Mat bonding and getting to know each other.
    I'm glad to hear that Jimmy talks about Sparrow with his friends, at least they know of her and finally got to meet her!
    At least Matt is completely honest with her, he doesn't do one night stands, he at least attempts to make a relationship with the girl he is with.
    Even though his relationship doesn't last long, Sparrow can probably change that!!! XD
    So while she was away, she was worried about her brother not fitting in but Avenged welcomed him to the family though he may picked some habits from the guys!
    She is right though, he would be great with kids!
    Aw she was really shy about asking Matt to go with her to the opening, so adorable!!!!!!!!!!!!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
    April 20th, 2011 at 05:51pm
  • flounder210

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    Absolutly awesome must read more!!
    April 20th, 2011 at 03:54am
  • hachie

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    I cannot tell you how much I love this chapter!
    Well I got a bit teary eye when she went to go see her mom, and she was just afraid that her daughter would disappear right in front of her.
    Well at least she getting her appetite back for a little while because she wants to make her mother happy.
    Though what her older sister said about Seth proposing to her is too soon for Sparrow.
    Even though Seth is six years older, Sparrow is still very young and still has to experience how to live.
    I think she deserves to be with the Angels on Victoria Secret because she is very beautiful.
    My most favorite part is when she reminiscing about the time her and Jimmy were in the park chasing ducks.
    Then she gets chased by one, hoping that Jimmy will save but he ends up getting scared and ran away like a scared little girl!!!! LOLOLOLOLOL
    Aw Matt and her are so adorable!
    Matt is very awkward and shy when it comes to Sparrow.
    At least they are getting to know each other even more when they hang out!
    I bet Jimmy rooting for them to get together!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
    April 4th, 2011 at 06:54am
  • hachie

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    YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Belle has made her debut!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
    Aw I just can see the love radiating off from both Brian and Belle!
    The way you describe them in this chapter made me go all mushy!!!! X3
    Jimmy and his entrance, I bet everyone freaked out when he came burrowing in with a girl over his shoulder!!!!!
    I really love this chapter, it has a lot of hyperness from both Jimmy and Belle!
    She finally met Matt and she is slightly afraid of Matt because of his size!
    I bet he is going warm up to her very soon since he smiled at her!!!! XD
    I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE AND HOPE IT'LL BE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    March 24th, 2011 at 08:11am
  • LoveLust7

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    I love this story so far! I can't wait til there's another chapter!! :D Keep up the good work
    March 24th, 2011 at 06:59am
  • hachie

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    OMG I absolutely love the first chapter!
    So she is the baby in the modeling world since the other look after her, making sure she doesn't develop a eating disorder.
    I bet she is happy that she is home and can spent time with her family and with JIMMY!!!!!
    Man I bet she wasn't expecting to run into Jimmy at the beach!
    That part where they were going to go to Jimmy but then he stopped and realized that they needed car to get there made me laugh so hard!!!!!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    March 16th, 2011 at 06:12am
  • hachie

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    Wow I love the summary, it's full of some addicting words!
    Man I wonder what are Matt's intention with her since she's not like all girls that are instantly swooned by him.
    I can't wait for the first chapter to be posted!!!!!!!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE POST IT SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
    March 11th, 2011 at 07:18am