Very brilliant so far! :) I like it. Very well-written and creative, too. :)
May 8th, 2011 at 05:45am
I only read the first paragraph and then stopped because you're not putting spaces between your sentences. I skimmed the rest of the page and saw that the whole chapter is the same.
I realize how picky I must sound, but I'm only letting you know so you don't get reported.