I love Michael and Chester's fight and how you wrote it was just awesome!!! xD And I love Sayer's last sentence! "...minus your load by one." MWAHAHA! YOU TELL HIM SAYER!!! XD
Chapter 23 was EXCELLENT!!!!!!!! The fight scene was brilliant and when Sayer stepped in, I was like Oooohhh my gosh!!! AHH! Loved it!
Chapter 24 was EXCELLENT as well! Her cousin was an unexpected surprise and when she said who she was supposed to kill I was like "Oh know she isn't!" xD But why does Eurydice have to be so...immature?!?!? She needs to do something else besides leave!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Gooosh!!
Why am I the only one commenting? Seriously people....
Anywho, this update brightened my day tremendously! I just wish Chester would stop being a douche and accept the fact that Eurydice is going to change----And yeah...It was great for a filler! xD
Here's another comment to hopefully brighten your day! :D "You have always been, and always will be, beautiful to me," he whispered against my lips. <This made me go "Awwww!" ^.^ I <3 Michael! And Chester of course, but Chester's kinda a jack ass right now. But that's how I expected him to be. ;) Luckily, he kinda got his poop in a group. lol
So they're turning into elves? Hmmm....Very interesting... :)
Great chapter! Sweet, romantic! AWESOME! Can't wait for the update!!!!
Yay! I am so happy when I get the email that this is updated! I smile like a loon! xD Awesome fighting sequence! Knew Sayer would kick butt! Kind of sad that she had to kill her former teacher, but if he was bad guy...well then... Why is Chester being such a douche!!!?!?!?!?!?! Lighten up! Can't wait for the update!
"In all truth? She scared me..." I loved this!! lol Great chapter and an awesome plan for escape! I was a little confused on the "grandmother" part though...But still very awesome!! xD
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!! I had a spazz out when I saw this had been updated! Yay! Okay... Sad about Robert's mother, very worried with Chester, happy when Erydice seemed okay...I can't remember anything else! It was just a really great chapter!!!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Eurydice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Crap!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG! 13 hours of fighting would wear me out too!!!!! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE! SOON! PLEASE!!!!!
I am mad at the King for not believing her!!! But that was so cool that the maids were elves! I was "WHOA! DUDE THAT'S SO COOL!!!" Great chapter! Can't wait for more!! :)
I really liked the conversation Eurydice and Michael had, but why did Chester have to be such an idiot? Holy crap!!! I hope those guys survive this! I don't like Robert's mother...
Chapter 12: Nice fighting! She kicks major butt!! But I feel so bad for her. :( I hope Chester kicks his dad's butt! xD
Chapter 13: Poor Robert! :( Morcaus gives me the heeby jeebies! What a creep! And more twists!! Thank you for mentioning me! It makes me feel uber special!! x)
You guys and your twists!!!!! Gosh!! How is this gonna end up now? I liked you having Robert in this chapter more. :) Now will Sayer still go kick some shapshifting elf butt?
This chapter absolutely broke my heart. :,( I feel so bad for Sayer and how she's angry at Michael. Love it though! "Oh, he's the next to die, I thought." That made me laugh for some reason.
Robert. Haha. Sorry. Can't get enough! So glad to read two new chapters in one night! xD Yay!
AMAZING CHAPTER!!! I freaked when she tried to attack the queen! Good Lord, your guys' story is gonna give me a heart attack here! Can't wait for the update!! <3