Capture Me and Take Me Away - Comments

I loved it. Nearly in tears as she died!!!! I agree with Bluecaty15 there are so many unanswered questions!!!!

i loved your story, you had me in tears a couple of times there. wait, so did ricky kill her parents or not?! It would've been cool if you had put in a last chapter in ricky's p.o.v. and show how her death had affected him. what happened to April and Monica?! So many unanswered questions here!!

aww i loved ithanks 4 writing

I love the last chapter i was in tears when she died to save plus while i was reading it a sad song on my ipod was playing so it made it more enjoyable

woah woah, how come i didn't receive the next chapter to edit?

aww i love it

I love your story. I love it so much that I have stay up all night. It is awesome. N forget about all of the haters who report you. You can that your a good writer if you have haters. So ignore them. Please update soon

she needs to run and never come back

Good work :-) can i be expecting a chapter soon? Also, of you want. I can go over all the first chapters and correct them so people commit to reading?

im going to try again. let me proof read first! here is my e-mail for pete's sake: all_again_for_you@hotmail.com i want to help you. you need a beta. badly. you need to fix everything. you cant expect people to love your story then its full of clumbsy sentences and horrible spelling

oh and im going to nit pick. in all the earlier chapters allowed. as in i was not allowed to do anywhere is not spelt aloud. aloud used in a sentence is i spoke aloud. meaning sheor he vocied an opinion for others to hear. also please correct all 'msn' languge like ur and u because if i recall correctly they are not part of the english language. thank you

dude you cannot. and i mean physically cannot bite her 'cherry'. his tongue being in there would have broken it. a cherry, as you called it is a thin membrane layer inside the vagina. unless his head went in or he has extendable jaws he bit nothing. thats all

i love it
update soon plz
i think it great

okay okay. time to critic. it is a very interesting plot line. and im enjoying it. but please please fix wording and spelling... if you want send me the chapters and i will personally go through it and fix all the mistakes then send it back to you to submit. atleast then you wont get reported so much. its so disapointing to see such an amazing plot go to waste. but other then that good job

SO Right now i freking hate Ricky(asshole) right know!! he is such a fucking douche bag bastered!!!!!!!!!!
BUT so far its goood cant wait till the the next up date=)

The people who reported you are Asshole, Keep writing!!

i dont think da car broke down
LOVE it
write more plz

The car so did not break down !!!!! I think he going to do something to her so she won't leave....can't wait for the next update

Oh the car so didn't break down! Are you gonna update again tonight?

This is me commenting like a good little reader! lol great chapter.