... and I'm still not satisfied - Comments

chaoslover (100)

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Well, I totally enjoy Lisa!
She seems down to Earth and at the same time lost in her own world.
I totally love that style!
Please update! I love your writing!

October 27th, 2011 at 09:45pm

Clara3 (100)

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Thanks, I'm glad you like it:D. And sorry for the spelling errors, it was almost 4 a.m when I wrote it, but I have to admit, I still have to work on my english (I'm not a native). I'll try my best on the next chapter, thank you very much for your comment it means a lot:D. (btw, I like your stories very very much)

March 24th, 2011 at 12:11am

I Am Death (100)

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A BRIAN MOLKO STORY!!
Ahem.

But yeah, there just isn't enough!
As soon as I read the whole American school in Luxembourg thing, I knew this had to be a Brian story :P

I like this so far. Poor girl, under the Molko charm :P

You have quite a few splling and gramatical errors that could probably be picked up for the better part with the use of a spell checker. :)
Like:
-Gee, Lisa, what were you doing with that freak? my friend Denisse, asked on with a desgusted figure on her face full of nipples covered with tones of make-up.

Teehee. I think you mean "pimples" here :P
*disgusted
*tonnes

March 22nd, 2011 at 10:50am