I Don't Like You, I Like Your Brother... I Think? - Comments

hey are you done with this or no? i hope not :)

New reader here and I must say I'm really enjoying the story a lot though I think both brothers are ass's in their own right which is good you done that cause thats most males specially in their akward teen years...

I did see a few mistakes like some place where you meant to say she it said he, nothing real big or anything like that just something you might wanna check out when you get the chance

I do love this story though and I hope you update soon I wanna see Zane beat up his brother

Much <3 Kat

*And cue the he's gonna rape her song*
he's a gonna rape her.
Oh he's gonna rape hhhhhhheeeeeer.
*sings outta tune*

i really like ur update! cant wait for the next update!

This reminds me of a book I reread over and over because I love it.
It's going good though, xD

*keep

love it so far kepp writing

:O! I freaking love your story so far! MUST...HAVE...MOOORE!!!! ^_________^ Post soon please!!!! :)

Turns*
-_- I'm displeased in your lack of updates...
*acts like mafia*
fefe the kitty will bite your head off if you don't update. Won't you fefe?
*coos* Yes you wil. Yes you will.

Nahhhh noo :,(

O.0 if you delete this story I will posses your soul and eat cookies

*smirks triumply*
hey you updated right?
*wiggles eye brows*

you know what how about four comments? huh? huh? i love it you just have to post more it be terrible if you didn't :D soooo POST! plz

3 Well this is the Fourth one soo you got 4 comments

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:P You would ask for three comments soo

hey nice story i like it so far u should really keep it goin :)