Life on the Moon - Comments

So many incoherent words are running through my mind right now!!!!
Just tell him!!!
She has to tell him or he might be gone forever.
<3 Michele

I can't even explain how much I love this story, and how exciting that last chapter was. I was on the edge of my seat, hoping she would spill the news to him! I really want her to tell him because I'm curious about his response. He might not take the news as bad as she's thinking, but then again, he could explode.

Great update, looking forward to more! <3

Awwww. I hate that she's feeling so guilty. She needs to tell him what is bothering her. He may have a hard time dealing with it, but at least he will know and they can work through it as a couple. The sex was awesome. I love this story so much, babe!

It is driving me crazy that i don't know her secret
in a good way though,
So many things are running through my mind
but i am pretty certain that it's pregnancy . . . but cancer has also crossed my mind
Does she have ovarian cancer?
<3 Michele

I'm glad they are over the fighting, but I really want to know what she is holding back :)

still waiting for the secret to come out....

Lovin' this story.
What is Whitney holdin' back?
More soon please!!

I'm happy they aren't fighting! Now on with outing secrets please, I'm dying here.

YAY! Her and Zacky are all better now :)

I wonder what the secret is... I wanna say that's she's pregnant but it feels like that's too predictable, unless I'm over analyzing this, I dunno we'll have to see I guess :) Do we get to find out in the next chapter? Cuz that would be awesome! Unless you wanna keep us in the dark for a little while longer. which would be mean! Just kidding! :)

okay please update soon!

Well obviously her news is good considering you said all of her friends would be ecsatic for her....is she pregnant? Got an amazing job offer? Hmm anyways, can't wait for more! <3

I thought she was gonna spill the beans there for a moment
but i super excited that they confessed that they still love each other
<3 Michele

This story is just so damn amazing. I was so excited that they showed some affection. I've been waiting for that for quite some time. Brian was a sneaky one, but it worked out to Zacky's advantage. I just hope she tells him soon!

They need to work things out soon! I'm dying to know what happens next. I have two favorite stories on this site, and this is one of them. You're doing such an incredible job with everything in this story, and I'm so impressed with the emotions you can capture. I love it!

i hope whitney has taken the day off work to sort her shit out

Can't wait for more! <3

Good update

I be honest, if i were Zacky, i would be praying that she was pregnant
as opposed to her fallen out of love with him
<3 Michele

Im dying to know her fucking secret!

Awe. :(

This story is seriously like. . . so GOOD, but yet so damn depressing. I just want the two of them to get together and talk. They need to stop staying away from one another, or at least stop fighting so damn much. They need to communicate and she needs to tell him what the hell is wrong with her!