Life on the Moon - Comments

is this going to pick up any time soon? i feel like its the same thing every chapter and im getting kind of bored of it...

Just tell him already!

SHE NEEDS TO OPEN HER MOUTH AND LET THOSE TWO WORDS COME OUT.

This story is so damn intense. It's driving me insane, and I'm not counting down the days until you update again. Seriously, Kayla, it's the best Zee story ever and I'm loving every single second of it. I hope she's not under stress cause that's not good for the baby. :(

I'm starting to get really frustrated with her . . .
I really hope she didn't use up her last opportunity to tell him
<3 Michele

This is ridiculous, she is pregnant. It happens. That is not an earth shattering secret for all of her worry. Especially since se knows he loves her

OMZV!!
She has to tell Zacky!

she gonna loose him if she doesnt tell him when he gets home

She just needs to grow some balls and tell him. Although I'm sure that's easier said than done. She's messing with poor Zacky's head though!

update soon please!

Part of me wants Zacky to give her an ultimatum
Either tell him whats up or he's gone, but somehow i think that might back fire one him
<3 Michele

I hope she tells Zacky shes pregnant!!!! Can't wait to see what happens next, awesome update

When Zacky gets home, she really needs to tell him she's pregnant!

She just needs to tell him what's going on!
She can't keep it a secret for much longer and he's not gonna wait around forever!

I KNEW IT! I can see why she's keeping it from Zacky, but she does need to tell him. If she doesn't she's DEFINITELY going to loose him.

Hopefully she'll tell him soon, and he'll understand

KNEW IT. I love this story Kayla and yes I am a bad commenter But I just couldn't not comment on this. I hope Zacky doesn't freak out when he finally knows.

Oh, snap! I didn't really expect that as much as I did her dying early. She hurled because of the stress, but pregnant was number 2 in my mind. Really awesome update. More soon please?

just tell him, but not in the middle of a fight....

I thought tht to begin with n thn thought she cdnt get pregnant lol bt surely if shes bin keepin it from him she wd strt showin? ? Loved it!! Plz update gen soon!! XD

I knew it. How's she going to be able to hide her secret when she starts showing?
Loved the update!

I KNEW IT! awesome update.

...I just found this story and I gotta say, I'm not sure how to feel. All of this build up and all of her bullshit treatment of Zacky is because she's PREGNANT?

Maybe when I step back and think about it more and reread the previous chapters, I won't be so annoyed, but as it stands, I currently just want to go up and bitch slap Whitney for being this melodramatic. The way she was thinking about this pregnancy sounded more like a horrific disease than a pregnancy. Also, how far along is she? I'm assuming she's at LEAST two months along since I vaguely remember that they'd been fighting for about that long before the story even starts, which means she should be getting into morning sickness.

Also, I hate to be super picky, but if they were really arguing during the beginning of the pregnancy, the stress alone would make her at a much higher risk for a miscarriage within the first two weeks. And finally, unless you're having her fighting with Zacky start out because of more than just her being pregnant, she's at least two months now, which means she's got about two months, tops, to tell Zacky because she's going to start showing and Zacky's not retarded.

Hopefully all this gets cleared up but for the time being, I'm really wary. I'm not trying to be super bitchy because I do enjoy your style of writing, I'm just trying to understand and help. Also, before anyone feels like commenting after me and telling me to take this and go shove it somewhere, this is constructive criticism. No one's perfect and I'm not claiming to be.