I'm trying to come up with a very detailed paragraph of a comment but I'm sort of at a loss for words, aha. This was just beautiful, fantastic, breath-taking. <3
Everything seemed brighter, almost radiant, as if the world were coated in glitter and gold. GORGEOUS SENTENCE.
I'm going to have to read more of your stuff some time down the road. This really blew me away. It was short like a drabble is supposed to be but there was so much more to it. I say that about lots of drabbles but this one was especially fantastic. It made me feel so little in a galaxy so big and beautiful.
This is really beautiful, but beautiful in a really broken way and I just love that! The writing itself was wonderful but the words you were saying were just scary and dark. I've never really read a Drabble about the end of the world and this was really cool. I liked that, through allthe destruction, you reminded us of how beautiful it could all be at the same time, with the stars I mean. This was amazing, I can't wait to read your other story!
WOAH MAN Okay, this is amazing. For something so short, it took my breath away how excellent it was. If I was a teacher and I got this as an assignment I would pin it on my wall and give you a 10000000000000000000000 % <3
But if you can manage to open your eyes against the debris, you’ll see how truly beautiful the stars are during the day. That last line, OH LORD! Sun explodes and shining stars out in the day. At first you don't know what it's about. Forrest Fire, house fire, something. Then it's about the sun and uhdfgkjgjs;jfdks.
I really like your layout. The banner goes well with the background. :) Wow, this was awesome. I really liked the description, it made it seem really real. And this is something a lot of people think about, I'm sure. The end line was my favorite. :) I tried to scroll down to read more but then I realized I couldn't. :( Great story!
Everything seemed brighter, almost radiant, as if the world were coated in glitter and gold. GORGEOUS SENTENCE.
I'm going to have to read more of your stuff some time down the road. This really blew me away. It was short like a drabble is supposed to be but there was so much more to it. I say that about lots of drabbles but this one was especially fantastic. It made me feel so little in a galaxy so big and beautiful.
Awesome job. :)