When the Sun Goes Down - Comments

I can't wait to see what more you have in store.
And what's you twitter thing? I'll follow you.
Mine's @LilaStoanes

I so didn't expect Abby to be the one to do that.
Absolutely incredible!!! LOVE LOVE LOVE!

I'm so happy Murphy saved her.
You wrote this chapter so well.
It was wonderful.

A-MAY-ZING! (Yes, I know there's no y in amazing, it's just so good, it deserved one.)
I can't wait for the next chapter. Excitement!

Great, like always.
I can't wait for more.

Your updates were lovely, as always.
I loved the intensity between Ryan and Adrienne when Matilda was infected.
It's so sad she was infected though.
I'm dying for Noah to profess his love for Adrienne's mom.
I don't know if you intended it to be that way, but I have a habit of reading between the lines, and that's what I'm seeing.

Love the new chapter. Just to give you a tip on writing, when someone moves their head to agree with someone, they nod. When they disagree, they shake, or shook (past tense). Can't wait for the next update!

Oh my gosh!
Why would you be so cruel as to leave a cliff hanger like this?
I'm dying to know what's going to happen.

Loved this!

I loved it like always.
You have a very good way of getting my adrenaline pumping.

This was exciting!
I can't wait for more.

Chapter Two: Voodoo shit is going down?! I really love how you put a supernatural twist to this story.

Chapter Three: Romeo! Damn, I love that Mexican. I'm starting to like Adrienne, also, Murphy and Connor being sweet boys and taking care of her Mama. Oh, and I love how Adrienne is all suspicious about them.

Chapter Four: I don't want to jump the gun but does Murphy fancy Adrienne? Please be together, please be together. My favorite part...[“A Mexican?” Murphy blurted out.”He kind of short?”
“Long hair?” Connor chuckled softly.”Weird fuckin’ name?”] I could not stop laughing my ass off.
Holy shit, there's zombies?! Man, this story is just blowing my damn mind.

:)

How ironic is this?! I looked on the stories pages and when I saw this story I was like, "Holy fuck, Boondock Saints story!" Then I looked at who it was written by and I flipped out: "Oh my god! She commented my fucking story!" And this all happened before I actually click on the story.

So, I just finished reading the first chapter...
I LOVE YOUR WRITING!!! So, so much.

That thing was seriously fucked up though! But I also love how you describe the brothers' feelings towards the thing.

I'm really enjoying this story so far, babe.

This is soooooooo good.

I can honestly say I have NEVER thought about the Boondock Saints and zombies gotta say it would be all kinds of awesome if there was Walking Dead in it!! Extra Norman!!!

You did great, again!

I got so excited when I seen you updated.
Then by the time I was able to get on here, I forgot.
But I remembered again, and I'm glad I did, because this was great.

I love this so much.

It was so good! I can't wait for the next update

Amazing!