In The Clouds - Comments

I don't think I have cried in such a short amount of time... :') That was simply beautiful! How are you not a well known writer on here! I will do whatever it takes to have people read your stories. Everything you write I relate to, the pain, anger, longing, love, and hate it just mixes together like poetry. I have to say I have fallin' in love with your writing.

This is stunning!
Although I'm not a fan of the fandom, I thought this was an amazing piece and it really pulled at my heartstrings.
I really felt for Brendon, and I loved the description you wrote.
Wonderful.
One of the best things I've read in such a long time.

oh my god, I love this so much.
Seriously, I just.
I don't even know what to say.
I didn't want it to end. <3

I'm not typically a fan of slash, but this was absolutely stunning. Everyone has a different theory about death and the afterlife, and as an author it's important to make your heaven seem plausible, and you've one an excellent job of that. I love the imagery, the concept of these messages being delivered to these souls and the idea of being reunited with lost love.

I love that you didn't bother going into the causes of death, it would've distracted from the story. While I am curious, I'm more invested in their heartbreaking and endearing relationship to bother with those technicalities. I can't even get over how absolutely beautiful their relationship is, that it would endure over twenty years, even through death. It's brilliant, it really is.

Amazing work. (:

I have to be completely honest, my eyes watered as I read this.
There was so much emotion written in the words and I just wanted to keep reading it.
Very well done.
I really want to know how and why Ryan died.