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  • DragonxFox

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    YOU MADE A GORGEOUS ENDING AND i will forever love and hate you for all these wonderful stories and characters <3
    February 8th, 2016 at 10:44pm
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    swear to you, 16. really?
    February 8th, 2016 at 10:33pm
  • DragonxFox

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    ahahahaha, the end of 13 was worth your little writing moment of roodness in 12. <3 yes i'm going to comment a lot and very randomly bc i love you and your characters and stories.
    February 8th, 2016 at 10:25pm
  • DragonxFox

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    see, i finished chapter 12 and there it was. i knew it. you rood

    accidentally double posted?
    February 8th, 2016 at 10:18pm
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    see, i finished chapter 12 and there it was. i knew it. you rood
    February 8th, 2016 at 10:18pm
  • DragonxFox

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    i'm on chapter 12 now. literally finished cheated hearts and came over to this one. and honestly, you're setting it up so wonderfully but i don't trust you anymore and i'm so paranoid it's driving me bonkers.
    great story and character building, love <3
    February 8th, 2016 at 10:14pm
  • mrsbellaray

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    ok this story really had an effect on me. it's flawless and perfect. the ending is incredible. so good, just... so good.
    June 14th, 2013 at 09:42pm
  • hiboux

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    I’ve quite literally fallen in love with this story. The way it is written is beautiful, and your characters are so very interesting.
    Your plot is brilliant, and you had me hooked from the very first chapter, and I couldn’t let it go until I had read it all.
    Thank you for having written it.
    I’m now going to have a look at all your other stories, because you write beautifully.
    August 19th, 2012 at 11:43pm
  • vices

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    this is so flawless ak sdhklcfahsdklfjhaw
    I LOVE THIS SO MUCH.
    July 13th, 2012 at 06:03pm
  • spoonerisms

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    The ending is so beautiful. There are tears in my eyes. I loved, loved, loved this story.
    July 12th, 2012 at 02:18pm
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    OH MY GOD JUST PLEASE FINISH THIS. I"M GOING TO CRY.
    May 6th, 2012 at 05:22am
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    I swear, you're my new favorite author on here! You just have this brilliant talent at writing. First you captivated me with Pearl and now this! =D I love the humor in this one.
    April 27th, 2012 at 04:03am
  • pre10tious

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    Wait.

    Joyce. Whyyy.
    April 4th, 2012 at 06:43am
  • pre10tious

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    Hyperventilating when I saw another chapter updated
    April 4th, 2012 at 06:22am
  • break.my.bones

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    omg this is so heartwrenching i can't handle it wahhhhhhh it all makes sense now though...you are so meannnnn
    April 2nd, 2012 at 04:04am
  • London-to-Tokyo

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    Lovely story. Quite a suprising ending in the sense that I thought It would be more Artemis having to give up being a Giver if he wanted to be with her. I didn't think that the Givers couldn't control everything. You've left us in a place where the plot could shift in any direction; to a tragedy or a happy ending. I just don't know! But love it so much.
    March 22nd, 2012 at 12:00am
  • SHYLA01

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    Holy shit. I did NOT see that coming.
    March 17th, 2012 at 05:31pm
  • Insane Gravity

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    I KNEW IT! I somehow knew that he was there because she was dying! I knew it >.<

    I just hoped it wasn't so D':

    Hattie <3

    Thanks for the update!
    March 17th, 2012 at 05:56am
  • andrea.howls

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    Oh my goodness! That's so sad! Hattie no! Tell him to come back and be by your side for however long you have left!
    March 17th, 2012 at 04:34am
  • wintergirl23

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    such a beautiful story. I can't wait to read the rest.
    March 17th, 2012 at 04:12am
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