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I absolutely loved this. I think the title of the drabble perfectly sums up the story, and the way so much is written in such a small amount of words is wonderful. Your writing is breathtaking and this drabble was very enjoyable to read. The last sentence is the best part, I feel like it wrapped it up nicely, but still left some questions for the reader, which is what every great piece of work should do.This was a wonderful drabble, and honey you should keep writing because you are beautifully talented.

This was gorgeous. I loved the underlining metaphor and the way you presented your words was really well done. I wish it wasn't so short, I want to hear more about this relationship! My only critique is that the line "I’m on edge as to what to happen" should probably read "I'm on edge as to what will happen", but that's just a nit picky grammar thing.
Awesome work.

This is simply beautiful. I love the way that you relate relationships back to reading. That's something that I see myself doing a lot at times with my own life and you express it all beautifully. It's not long or overly extravagant, but I absolutely adore it! I think you did this really well and whatever inspired you to write this...find ways to continue tapping into it because I think it could really help you develop and create even more beautiful works.

This was so beautiful. I really appreciated it as a reader and writer. As always, I love your style and think you're very talented at writing.

Wow. This was amazing.
You have such a wonderful way with words lady!
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Wow.
I'm left utterly speechless.
This is fucking brilliant. That's about all I can say.
I don't think that anyone could write anything better.
Amazing work!

Wow, I feel blessed to be the first person to comment this. What a beauty this work was, and as a lover or books and what they stand for I absolutely adored this. I thought this was beautiful and I understood where the character in this was coming from. Your words were elegant and innocence like that I wanted a happy ended, but some stories are just not written like that…and that’s what I liked about this story. I think this is my new favorite one shot on mibba.