Along the Way - Comments

Love it! I loved the way McKenna was talking about Brian. And now they're going out for ice cream. Can't wait for more!

Amazing update :D

I love the pictures at the end :)

I bet it was Hector that trained Benji because that dog is almost as protective as Hector!
Brian was probably extremely worried that he might get bit by Benji but then relaxed when he didn't.
But at least Brian and Kairi will get to know each other more over ice cream!
And Mckenna really likes hanging out with Kairi doesn't she.
She doesn't mind hanging out with Kairi while waiting for her brother.
I can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PELASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jimmy's adorable! I want to more pleas :)

Amazing update :D
yay!! Jimmy and her are now friends too

loved the update!

I love Jimmy. I just found this story and I love it.

Nixon's so nice. And from what he said about Hector, I like Hector even more. Jimmy's hilarious! I laughed so hard when he first ran into her. Can't wait for an update!

Yay jimmy has made his appearance!
And he has instantly befriended Kairi from just running into her.
Now Jimmy will definitely brighten Kairi's day because of how he embraces life!
I bet he was completely surprise when Brian knew Kairi!
Awwwww Hector is the most sweetest and kind guy ever!
He talks about Kairi so passionately and he gets very protective when he introduces her to new people especially to guys!
I look forward to the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I la-la-la-la-loooooove this!!!!! :) update ASAP!

Love your story!!! Cant wait for more to come out!

Great update!
Sorry for the late comment but I've been busy with work and school.
I actually thought that it was Brian that was looking for Kairi going to apologize for being an ass.
I'm glad that it was a friend of hers, hopefully he can help her out while Hector is away.
Nixon seems like a cool guy and I can't to find out more about him.
I really liked the update and I can't wait for more!!!

ME! ~waving hand around~
I really though that it was Brian since she mentioned that the guys had tattoos all over his arms but then when they covered Kairi's eyes, I thought otherwise.
Because with Brian would be completely awkward with the way he treated her when they first met.
Another close friend is introduced and he seems like a very adventurous guy!
It's so adorable when the kids are excited to have Kairi read to them and they don't want to leave when their time is up with her.
I look forward to the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lol I thought it was Brian who came by to visit her at the library. You got me there good :D
Great update

I love it! This story is great! Brian's rude, but his dad is awesome! I can't wait for more.

Nixon from framing Hanley no effin way!

Loved the update!
I'm glad to hear that I helped lol.
It was so funny that Kairi ran into both Brians at the supermarket lol
Brian Jr.'s reaction though was priceless.
He was a real jerk to Kairi and I'm glad that Papa Gates gave him what he deserved.
I bet he feels like an ass for what he did not once but twice.
He's probably not going to stop apologizing, that is if he really feels bad for what he did.
Can't wait for the next one!!!

I LOVE IT. I LUV IT. I LUV IT I LOVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEE IIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTT.
this story seems so interesting and it seems like it will be hilarious.
Keep Writing

LOL She ran into Brian and Papa Gates!
Now Brian knows why Kairi keeps running into him literally!!!! XD
At least Papa Gates got after him for being so rude to Kairi before!
LOL I laughed when she thought there was two Brians!!!!
I can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!