Along the Way - Comments

Amazing update :D
lol Brian got it good from papa Gates for being rude to Kairi.

If only she knew that douche bag who ran into her is Mckenna brother.
I love your story..I would love if you continue it. :D
Great update

OF COURSE US READERS WANT YOU TO CONTINUE THIS STORY DX DON'T SPEAK LIKE THAT!! Loved the update xD It was so cute with little McKenna and Papa Gates haha, if they only knew xD lol Well I loved this update and I can't wait for more :)

Papa Gates doesn't know that Kairi was talking about his son! LOL
I bet McKenna is going to bring Kairi up when Syn is going to be over for dinner or something!
Aw Papa Gates saying that Kairi is beautiful, so adorable!!!! X3
I really can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great update!
I was laughing so hard when I was reading the part were Brian Sr. was insulting his own son.
I love the fact that Kairi brought it up lol
When Kairi runs into Brian Jr.again, it's going to be hilarious.
Especially if his dad is there.
I really liked the update and I can't wait for the next one!!!

Hehe, ironic that she's talking about his son.

Okk;; imma need anew update like pronto!!! :)
I loved this;; jeez Brian is a douchee!
Anywhoo;; I love it!

Moreeeee! Pleasee!! Like Flash fast would be great!! :)

<3 kk&&gates

Wow Brian was totally jackass!
He didn't even wait for Kairi explain why she was standing there in front of the door!
Man he is going to regret how he treated her when he runs into her again.
Damn if Hector was there, he would beat the shit of Brian for being so disrespectful to her!
So Kairi only trusts to go to concerts with Hector because she knows that he can keep her safe from any harm!
I can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This story amazing so far..I can' t wait to read more soon :D

I just started reading your story and I really like it!
I love how Hector is such a good friend to Kairi and how they've stuck together through thick and thin.
It sucks that he's far away now and in the military but I'm glad that Kairi is still supportive even if she doesn't like it.
Brian was such an asshole about bumping into her.
I can't wait to see what happens when he finds out that she's blind.
Can't wait for the next update!!!

D: awwweee what a jerk face D:< freakin brian xD I really like this story just by the first couple of chapters you've posted :) It's pretty original and awesome.

Brian's being a meany :(
But Pinkly is still adorable. Tehe!

I really love the idea for this. I've never read a story about a blind girl, mute girl yes and I've seen one about a deaf girl, but never a blind girl.

About the first chapter or prologue (Can't remember which it is) you called one of the boys a blonde boy, but she wouldn't know that. You should probably use another sense to describe him with. Maybe he has a lisp or something, or you could just say he's the leader or the meanest or something. Just a small note, I thought it was an adorable scene though, especially with Hector.

I love this story!
The first chapter was so adorable, Hector coming to Kairi's rescue and becoming best friends with her.
And as they grew up Hector stood by Kairi's side and protected her against very horny assholes in high school!
And dump any girl that was being disrespectable to Kairi!!!!
He is one true best friend!
I can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

oh this interesting. i don't think i've ever read a blind story before. awh its nice that hector took her under his wing and protected her. but he's going to join military? hmmm, i hope nothing bad happens to him. i'm excited to see where this story goes so write another chapter, everything feels mysterious right now!

This intro made me “aw.” Hector seems like a good friend. The military thing makes me nervous though. *Bites nails* And I have a blind character too. But I haven’t posted her story yet because I’m still working on it. But either way the start was interesting and I hope Kairi isn’t scarred from bullying! :)

Ahh I can't wait till the next update!