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  • Plague Rat

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    nononononono all your stories are too short you can be creative and cause problems and stuff just keep it going please !!!!!!!! i need to read a good gerard romance story
    February 17th, 2008 at 05:03am
  • mollyannamusic

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    awhh..
    i like this story too much.
    you can't end it yet!!
    xoxo
    Molly
    February 17th, 2008 at 02:49am
  • Alex Drake

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    =O You're ending it?! What shall fill my spare time with now?.... i'll go with your other stories ^_^
    February 16th, 2008 at 10:16pm
  • K-TGales

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    ew she's got a little crush on frankie...*giggles girlishly*
    ...now that that's over...
    great update! =)
    February 15th, 2008 at 03:40am
  • Springsteen.

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    aww I love this story.
    but but but her & gerard are so cute together!
    aww but i <3 frankie...
    update soon!
    =]]
    February 15th, 2008 at 03:11am
  • HopeWeForgotExists

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    amazing. anyway, is there an ironing board on top of the red thing next to gerard in the picture? it really looks like there is...anyway.
    February 15th, 2008 at 02:58am
  • Sunber

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    Hmmm, I WONDER what the idea is.
    It kinda makes me sad. She loves Gee, she STALKED Gee... *sigh*
    It's your story. Maybe you'll be able to change my opinion.
    *hugs*
    Sunny-Lee <3
    February 15th, 2008 at 02:58am
  • mollyannamusic

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    awhhhhhh :]
    xoxo
    Molly
    February 15th, 2008 at 02:45am
  • Sunber

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    :( I hate fillers cause I never have a favourite line. it's quite depressing.
    But, I forgive you, because you message me. :D
    First of all... there needs to be a problem in this story, you know? This is why you're stuck, it's cause there's no problem for your character to deal with. Remember your last story? Their were problems. So, you need a problem, take your time and think about one. :)
    ILY!
    Sunny-Lee <3
    February 14th, 2008 at 03:31am
  • rock n roll junkie.

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    haha crazy enough that it works!
    February 13th, 2008 at 03:01pm
  • Plague Rat

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    how sweet i likey the storeh
    February 13th, 2008 at 03:37am
  • Sunber

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    Nice update, kinda short and filler-ish though.
    Awhhh, Mikey's a cutie. I always have the intention to write Mickey like Mickey Mouse, but it's no c... and then i mentally kick myself, because actually kicking yourself kinda hurts and makes you trip a lot...
    You know?
    Sunny-Lee <3
    February 12th, 2008 at 11:12pm
  • RIOT!xoxoSCARG33

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    YAY!!
    THEY 2GETHER!!
    LOL!!
    GR8 CHAP NEWAY!!
    UPDATE SOON YEA!?
    LUV YA!!
    XOXO
    February 12th, 2008 at 09:46am
  • Your Mom

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    LOL at that last part.
    Anywhore, great two or three chapters. XD

    Update soonnn. [x
    February 12th, 2008 at 06:35am
  • Geekey

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    oh yes, gerard has the best ways of asking girls out.
    mikey is amazingful.

    more please.
    February 12th, 2008 at 04:25am
  • mollyannamusic

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    awhhh!
    adorableee!
    more please?!
    xoxo
    Molly
    February 12th, 2008 at 03:27am
  • HopeWeForgotExists

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    I LOVE this story

    not in the creepy stalkerish way, but this story is amazing, thank you for bringing this
    into the world :]

    once again I was having a completely shitty day and your update to your amazing story made it better.
    February 12th, 2008 at 03:26am
  • Dr. Death Defying

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    Aw. This is SO cute.
    February 12th, 2008 at 03:03am
  • rock n roll junkie.

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    awwwwww.... i knew i could see sparks about to fly!!!!!!
    update soon?
    February 10th, 2008 at 02:39pm
  • Alex Drake

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    AAww yay! They're so sweet together xDD!!

    [Edit]: Ooo double post ... Whistle
    February 10th, 2008 at 02:32pm
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