A Watercolor Life - Comments

Wait... is the story finished? Already?
Anyway, I loved it! They finally got together, bwah XD

Your writing is unbelievably beautiful. Normally, I can't enjoy a story with heaps of description. For me, it takes away from it. But your writing captivates me; I love the way you write.
Even though I'm confused with why she's upset (I hope I'm supposed to be) I'm still enjoying this thoroughly.
And I like how parts of it are hilarious, too. "...and he was dripping sex. No wait, sweat, it was sweat." That's the funniest thing I've read it a long time :D
Great work!

I adore your writing style and just wanted to say I died laughing at Chapter Six. I can't even.
Some parts were a bit confusing, but these made me laugh the hardest:
Okay, look, go apologize, kiss him, pet his hair and tell him it’s all glossy. I don’t know. Just do something before his water breaks and he gives birth to the biggest PMS bomb I’ve ever seen. And, by the way, you draw like a beast.

Mir actually got on the tip of his toes and did hand signs to Chan. Za was never good with playing hand-charades, but either he was telling her ‘oh, bitch you be so fucked’ or ‘calm the fuck down I’m having a seizure.’ Either didn’t seem to work.

I can't breathe.