Save Me. - Comments, page 2

catzumi_zero (100)

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Just trying out something^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

May 15th, 2011 at 01:50am

catzumi_zero (100)

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The future is bulletproof!
The aftermath is secondary!
It's time to do it now and do it loud!
Killjoys, make some noise!

Credit: panic-and-scream | © MCR

May 15th, 2011 at 01:49am

justeva. (100)

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if Shane dies i'm going to cry... ):

May 14th, 2011 at 11:07pm

stallion duck. (100)

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ohhhh my god. Tell me he isnt...

May 14th, 2011 at 07:34pm

MarshmallowCat! (100)

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im almost scared to read the next update....(sniffle sniffle)

May 14th, 2011 at 05:12pm

tommo. (100)

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OH MY GOD!!!
no!!! Shane cannot die!!! Dude, you made me cry :(((
Please update lik ay-sap!!!

May 14th, 2011 at 05:09pm

Durch-Den-Monsun-87 (100)

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i feel so bad for Shane. *sniff sniff*

May 14th, 2011 at 04:44pm

MorganRiot (100)

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your story is awesome. I have came attached to your charcaters and thats not easy for me

May 14th, 2011 at 04:14pm

sinfull nightstalker (100)

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Noooooo!! i cant cry.. this storys to sad.. i love it

May 14th, 2011 at 08:29am

Bloodwing (150)

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This is a good story, detail is nice and all, but I found some flaws.

You seem to mistake then with than quite a lot. Somewhere towards the beginning of the story you wrote something like he grabbed my color, which color should be collar. And you're story isn't always consistent with it's own details. At one point, you said Don was only an associate type person the he only knows and hardly talks to in class, but then you mentioned them walking home together and so forth. There were some other mistakes in there that I saw. I would read over the story and correct the mistakes in there.

Other than that though, it's a pretty good story.

May 14th, 2011 at 04:11am

catzumi_zero (100)

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Zomg! the comments are orgasmic!!!

May 14th, 2011 at 03:32am

DistortedGrey (100)

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I'll be lying if I told you I didn't tear up.
Keep it coming! :D

May 14th, 2011 at 03:30am

Durch-Den-Monsun-87 (100)

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AHHHHHHHHHHHIT'S GETTING SO SAD!!!!!!!!!!
*sniff sniff* i don't want shane to die
:'(

May 14th, 2011 at 03:28am

chana300 (100)

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hi, when you wrote in the summary "terminal inness" do you wanted to write "terminal illness" by any change?

May 14th, 2011 at 03:23am

Durch-Den-Monsun-87 (100)

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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
*snuggles up to Paris and Shane*

May 13th, 2011 at 04:47am

Durch-Den-Monsun-87 (100)

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WHAT THE FUCK NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SDFJKHG;LIASHEFOIUGHAGRFEO;IHFDZAGOIUAHFDLKGAREJHARUHAGRDPKGFDAHFAGDJAGFDHUH;KJG;UHFDSAIHAGFDS
yeah that's my reaction to getting to the end of that last chapter. it's taken me HOURS to read this and im like WHAT THE FUCK NO I WANNA READ MORE!!!!!!
i seriuolsy hope you update soon or i might kill my laptop! which would make my devoted readers come adn kill you b/c i wont be able to update a lot anymore.
newho! love the story so far. hope you update soon! ^_^

May 12th, 2011 at 09:55am