It was adorable. I really liked it, and written from a male's point of view? Marvelous. I actually forgot about your gender until now, when I came to comment. I was geniuely(sp) surprised when I started to read, the details are great. It was emotional, I liked how the guy seemed to feel more than the woman. It gave the story a realistic tone, as if this guy was actually telling you this experience from the bottom of his heart. All in all, I really liked it. Good job.
James, oh my god! I love it. The description and overall outcome is simply beautiful. Once again I am amazed at your utter talent. I'm proud! Very well done :)