Mr. Popular meet Mr. Emo - Comments

this the start of a good story and can not wait for more.

Oh for pete's sake!! I give up. I'm sorry that I couldn't help.

Well that link came out wrong... What I meant to do was tell you how to type it correctly. Let's try again.
Use only what I put inside the the round brackets. Don't include the round brackets. I hope that makes sense...

(Eminem's "Lose Yourself")

I hope this helps.

I like it. Please update soon. Just check the some of the spelling and sentence construction. XD

I noticed that you wanted to put a url in. Put this in.

Eminem's "Lose Yourself"

It took me years to figure out how to do link's and stuff. ;)

The story seems really promising. I can't wait to read more!!

This seems really interesting :3
Please update soon ^.^