This was very good.
April 23rd, 2011 at 08:02pm
It had a quick and easy-to-follow plot line, good job on that. ^^
The details were really good too, I felt as if I was there with him on the roof.
I liked your character too, he was an interesting fellow, murderer and rapist...I would say my kind of guy, but I wouldn't want to know a guy like that....he's my kind of character, there.
I hope you place in the contest.
