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  • teen spirit.

    teen spirit. (100)

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    Kay, I just want to clear something up, even though I'm pretty sure this is incredibly stupid of my part.

    Is Tom, Oli's brother? Like, Sykes?

    Anyways, I liked the layout. It was easy enough to read. Although, the letters were a bit hard to read.

    You had a couple of mistakes in here, but that's alright.

    I loved the whole plot though, I really like the song 'Coffee Break' so that just made this story better for me. (:

    Great job. (: <3
    March 14th, 2011 at 11:04pm
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