Teenage Dream - Comments

gosh darn it I say cute too much but here it goes
Aaaah the fort was so cute! and the bonfire and motel part aaawh.
I don't know what it is, but you write so sugary and sweet and somehow right to the point and it makes me jealous. :p
Lovely job, yet again!

Yes, as everyone has stated, the hero thing was spot-on. Absolutely adorable. <3
I kinda feel the same way with my bestest buddy (AKA boyfriend - because I'm the luckiest girl alive <3). And I think it's really sweet that it didn't just turn into sex. That was nice. (:
Keep up the great work! :D

AMAZING, AGAIN. You have talent girl. Very adorable and you have these little things in the stories that just pop out, like the hero thing. Ah, brilliance.

I just read this now, cause I'm such a delayed child. But this was just beautiful . <3
The whole storyine was just amazing, and the hero part was my favourite, makes me go 'aww' every time.

This, Jenna, made me cry yet again.

My favorite part of the story was when she told Nick he was her hero. It was adorable.
I liked how you used the song 'Teenage Dream,' but you didn't have them have sex on the first night they were together. It made the whole thing seem more real.
It's amazing how people can like each other but be too scared to admit it. I've been in that situation many times, and it sucks. I liked how you put that in the story, too, though. It was cute.

I loved the one-shot, and if you were to base a story off of it later on, I think it would be perfect for that. Maybe if you took it a couple years in the future and have one of them transfer to the other person's college. See where things picked up.

Loved it <3
Mariah.

Oh my lord. this was amazing! It actually brought tears to my eyes!1 thank you so much Jenna!

Jenna, I kind of LOVE this. Everytime I read something of yours, it brings a smile to my face. You are truly an amazing writer. Oh, and I'll comment Wish You Were Here most likely tomorrow...I'm running low on time here sweetie.
Great one shot though.