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  • Justin Bieber H8ter

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    LOVE IT! Can't wait for more
    October 6th, 2011 at 03:59pm
  • Justin Bieber H8ter

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    please update soon!
    September 28th, 2011 at 03:32pm
  • Fantasy Monroe

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    This is really good. I like to read paranormal stories, since I like paranormal. But some of then are no good or doesn't make any sence, but this was really good.

    Its different in its own way, which I love. I like the summary it drew me in. Along with the tittle, it caught my eye. Your details are very good. The way you describ the feeling, is very good.

    I can tell this is going to be a great story, can't wait to read more :)
    September 21st, 2011 at 06:56pm
  • Dark Heart

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    It is really good so far
    Please carry on writing xx
    September 18th, 2011 at 11:27pm
  • Violet Ice

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    I just got my internet back so I'll be writing again soon =) probably have an update sometime in the next couple weeks =D so glad you guys like it !
    September 15th, 2011 at 11:02pm
  • Justin Bieber H8ter

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    Amazing! When will u update?
    September 15th, 2011 at 05:18pm
  • Soulless.Temptation

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    Amazing...
    Wow...
    The first chapter is verrrrry well written :)
    Oozing curiosity over here!!

    XxxxX
    September 13th, 2011 at 06:57pm
  • Violet Ice

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    Could not have said it any better myself Saphire =D

    that is basically what I tried to say but me with explaining things has never been my forte LOL ^.^
    April 11th, 2011 at 05:54am
  • Sapphire Eternity

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    To say life after death is a bit of a misunderstanding in a way... The way i see it is like this. We never die, our bodies may die but our spirits live for ever :)
    When our time is through with this body and we have reached our of our spirit goals for this body we travel to the "other side" until we are ready to return back to the earth plane and experiance human life again.
    YAY!!!!! third comment lol
    April 10th, 2011 at 05:42pm
  • Violet Ice

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    In fact, I do believe in life after death but it is in a different way then dying and going to heaven... maybe where we go after earth is called heaven, but i don't believe we will have a body like we do now. ^.^ YAY SECOND COMMENT.... YAY ANY COMMENTS AT ALL <3333 keep commenting =P and tell me if there's any mistakes or spots for improvement, I would love your feedback =D
    April 8th, 2011 at 08:37pm
  • Hikari-Kira

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    yay for the first comment! ^^ i'm intrigued...it's written very well and i'm looking forward to the next chapter! out of curiousity (and because of the mention in the story) do you believe in life after death? you don't have to answer, i'm just curious. =)
    April 8th, 2011 at 12:26pm
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