The Unseen - Comments

LOVE IT! Can't wait for more

please update soon!

This is really good. I like to read paranormal stories, since I like paranormal. But some of then are no good or doesn't make any sence, but this was really good.

Its different in its own way, which I love. I like the summary it drew me in. Along with the tittle, it caught my eye. Your details are very good. The way you describ the feeling, is very good.

I can tell this is going to be a great story, can't wait to read more :)

It is really good so far
Please carry on writing xx

I just got my internet back so I'll be writing again soon =) probably have an update sometime in the next couple weeks =D so glad you guys like it !

Amazing! When will u update?

Amazing...
Wow...
The first chapter is verrrrry well written :)
Oozing curiosity over here!!

XxxxX

Could not have said it any better myself Saphire =D

that is basically what I tried to say but me with explaining things has never been my forte LOL ^.^

To say life after death is a bit of a misunderstanding in a way... The way i see it is like this. We never die, our bodies may die but our spirits live for ever :)
When our time is through with this body and we have reached our of our spirit goals for this body we travel to the "other side" until we are ready to return back to the earth plane and experiance human life again.
YAY!!!!! third comment lol

In fact, I do believe in life after death but it is in a different way then dying and going to heaven... maybe where we go after earth is called heaven, but i don't believe we will have a body like we do now. ^.^ YAY SECOND COMMENT.... YAY ANY COMMENTS AT ALL <3333 keep commenting =P and tell me if there's any mistakes or spots for improvement, I would love your feedback =D

yay for the first comment! ^^ i'm intrigued...it's written very well and i'm looking forward to the next chapter! out of curiousity (and because of the mention in the story) do you believe in life after death? you don't have to answer, i'm just curious. =)