I love the layout. It caught my interest immediately but I've always been the type to dwell on layouts. Your choice of wording is simple yet quite fitting. The descriptions made me feel as if I was watching it in a movie. Stunning really.
As for the story, it sounds as if it's going to be interesting and I would absolutely adore to read more. I'm certainly subscribing because I'm interested as to where this is going.
I think the story-line sounds interesting and would like to see where this story goes. I like your narrative in this, but I'm a bit confused as to who the main characters are exactly. Were they people mentioned in the summary? Anyway, I'll be subscribing. This looks interesting.
Your choice of wording is simple yet quite fitting. The descriptions made me feel as if I was watching it in a movie. Stunning really.
As for the story, it sounds as if it's going to be interesting and I would absolutely adore to read more.
I'm certainly subscribing because I'm interested as to where this is going.