Ah, I love the song Critical. The piano version is even more beautiful. The first time I head it; I cried my little heart out. And I loved the new chapter.(: I hope you can update agian soon.
*Subscribes.* I'm loving it. I am totally into this story. I don't want to be a grammar bitch, but on chapter 1: It's Kevin and I not..."Me and Kevin." You could get reported for simple mistakes like that. I hope you update soon! (:
Keep up the good work <3
And if you like the circle of DC I have a storie about Nick Jonas (Once In A Lifetime) You're very welcome to read and tell me what you think!
And again, love this storie <3