Tear Tracks Forever - Comments

  • lazziebear

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    Yeah :(
    And thanks!! I just started a new story "Rainbow Eyes" so check that out
    If u wanna!
    June 20th, 2011 at 03:38pm
  • Christine Salvator

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    OMG! It's over :'( Awwwh but I L-o-v-e-d I-t Your awesome! :D I admire your work!
    June 20th, 2011 at 10:26am
  • lazziebear

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    Awwwh thanks! It means a lot to me!
    June 9th, 2011 at 09:15pm
  • morphine.

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    I love it :D I love stories like these. Like the girl goes away for the summer to a small town and lives with people who seem fine and all but then BAM! there's a twist to the whole and everything changes! LOVE IT :D
    June 8th, 2011 at 06:44am
  • lazziebear

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    I think u mean must "write" more haha...but thanks!
    Theres only about 2 more chapters left! Eek!
    June 6th, 2011 at 09:31pm
  • Christine Salvator

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    Must. Read. MORE!!!
    June 6th, 2011 at 06:47am
  • lazziebear

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    alrite, so i just learned that even if someone is not technically an adult (like 15 or16) they can still be trialed as an adult for first degree murder so im changing Rhee's age BACK to 16 turned 17. sorry if u guys find this confusing! sorry!
    May 7th, 2011 at 04:39am
  • lazziebear

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    And also, I'm changing Rhee's age from 17 to 18 so it's legal for her to be in jail and she's not a minor. Sorry if this is confusing! I'm just trying my best!
    April 28th, 2011 at 01:11am
  • lazziebear

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    Guys, I've gotten a lotta feedback about how Rhee tried to kill herself this early on in the story and how it doesn't make sense. So I'm gonna rewrite chap 11, make some more bad stuff happen and THEN Rhee tries to kill herself. Mkay?!?!? lol.
    April 28th, 2011 at 12:28am
  • lazziebear

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    i think u meant Rhee trying to kill herself.
    hmm, thanks for the suggestion and compliment :) thank u :) i'll keep that in mind
    April 26th, 2011 at 10:04pm
  • Chloe Gray

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    Yes. I liked the update. Rhee and Alex are so cute. And Alex trying to kill herself isnt going to help her case. If anything it makes her look guilty. But good job none the less. :)
    April 26th, 2011 at 05:52am
  • lazziebear

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    Thanks for the suggestions! But what do you mean by "whiny and needy?"
    April 23rd, 2011 at 03:25pm
  • Christine Salvator

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    I love this story! I'm just really confused on why she is wanting to kill herself so soon.... I know this is your story but for the love of all that's good don't make her whiny and Needy... ick

    You know not that she is right now or anything but it could end up that way... and we dont need another Twilight ;)

    But anyways I love it! Well Done!
    April 23rd, 2011 at 07:05am
  • lazziebear

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    Thanxx :)
    I'll update soon, promise! Did you like the twist?
    April 22nd, 2011 at 02:55am
  • Chloe Gray

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    Man... I was sitting here wondering what the twist would be.. And that was totally not it. You really pulled a fast one on me there. Well done. :) *Waits for Update* ;)
    April 22nd, 2011 at 01:10am
  • lazziebear

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    thanx :)
    and oh, i'm absolutely POSITIVE that you're going to love the twist. either love or hate. lol. it changes the whole story ;)
    April 13th, 2011 at 01:12am
  • Chloe Gray

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    Eek! Love the update! Cant wait for your twist!
    April 12th, 2011 at 06:43am
  • lazziebear

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    kay kay
    and thanx ;)....but all credit goes to u baybay..lol
    April 10th, 2011 at 01:47am
  • Aly Jones

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    OMZ, I LOVE Ne-Yo! He’s so awesome and cool and … hooooootttttt. Okay, let’s keep that a little secret, ’Kay? ’Kay. :) Anyways, love the story, can’t wait for more, you rock. :D Oh, and I love your layout. ;D
    April 9th, 2011 at 11:54pm
  • lazziebear

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    thanx :)
    and i'd LOVE more readers
    AHHHHHHHHHHHH OH MY FREAKING GOSH ITS TWO PAGES OF COMMENTS!!!
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    please?
    lol
    April 8th, 2011 at 11:18pm