Well. Didn't even notice someone already commented with the same exact thing. So I'm just gonna say that I really do love it and that you should keep updating(:
I love this already, deary! Your writing just gets better and better with each story! I feel bad for Olivia. I mean, not like pity, but just bad that she's Sort of feels shadowed by her sister. I can't wait for more! (:
Holy shit, I love this already!!! Your writing style is really great. I like how this one in Olivia's POV instead of third person like your JohnO story. It's different. I also love how you contrast Ava and Olivia. I'd have to say that I'm more of an Olivia. I'm excited to see where this goes so please update soon!
i hope garrett and liv talk more
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