Damsel in Distress - Comments

Loving Wolf Girl (100)

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I loved it. Alli was so awesome. She had a tough girl attitude and gave Edward a hard time. It was so amazing. And you can't write Twilight story without Alice. I'm glad you didn't. It was a really good story. The changes in Alli made things so much more fun and so much more interesting. Loved it.

December 25th, 2012 at 06:46pm

Bubblegum Pops (100)

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LOVED IT!!! :D
It wa absolutely amazing! :)

February 8th, 2012 at 11:58pm

I_Am_Sherlocked (100)

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This is good, but would make a kick-ass story!!!

October 5th, 2011 at 11:26pm

Trig-ger (100)

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its really good. :)

March 20th, 2011 at 07:24pm

nicolecullen (100)

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I loved it. I know it's one shot but I think u should make it a story :D

March 17th, 2011 at 09:45pm

FictionisTrue12 (100)

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it was good :) i think you should make it into a story i mean i get it's only a one shot but it would make a great story :)

March 17th, 2011 at 02:13am

HbisYellow (100)

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Yay! I get the first comment(: Haha That was really good! I'm trying to critic you like you do to me, but I didn't see any grammatical or spelling errors.
P.S. I love it that your girl characters are always tough and kickass (in the stories I've read). Haha it's different than the stereotypical love stories :D

March 16th, 2011 at 03:30am