A Safe Bet - Comments

  • emilyrose

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    I love it!!!
    July 12th, 2011 at 09:26am
  • deanna13

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    Aw omg that was soo cute
    John really does like her and
    he knows he will lose her if he
    continues with the bet. Hopefully he
    will realize it isnt worth it before he breaks
    her heart and his own
    July 12th, 2011 at 08:07am
  • Leaaaaaaaah.

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    I'm really keen for the chapter when the bet is revealed. this chapter was great, the writing and how this whole kiss scene happened was awesome! :)
    July 12th, 2011 at 07:50am
  • edgar allan no.

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    Favorite chapter. Hands down. Favorite part? “I cry every single time I watch Armageddon,” he admitted.. Why? Because my reaction was, "Holy crap. So do I!"
    July 12th, 2011 at 07:42am
  • letsfabricate

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    You guys are amazing! Such awesome writers!
    I'm actually looking forward to Harlow finding out about the bet.. and when they both finally admit they love each other lol so update soon please! :-)
    July 10th, 2011 at 11:27pm
  • CallMeHopeC

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    I really like your story, please write soon [:
    July 7th, 2011 at 09:05pm
  • MYP

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    Everytime John does something cute in this story I forget that he really is a dumbass with the bet!!! Ahhh. He seems so cute, but poor Harlow doesn't deserve that. She's so awesome. I cannot wait for more!!!
    Update again soon please!!!
    June 30th, 2011 at 08:29pm
  • thatswhatshesaid0

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    John.is.stupid.
    End of story
    Although, he was pretty sweet in this chapter haha
    June 30th, 2011 at 06:00am
  • lovelyhope

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    Why won't he just call off the bet?! He needs to forget about his stupid reputation or else he's going to break Harlow.
    June 30th, 2011 at 05:37am
  • somebody_who_cares

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    OMGOSH THIS IS GETTING BETTER! If that's even possible :]
    UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
    June 30th, 2011 at 04:05am
  • whilethefirewasout

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    vfdesolmrgkbhadlikngfeskjf THIS IS AMAZING! Harlow and John almost kissed! Well, you already know that, you wrote it hahaha. but still !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! aaaagggghhhh AND she's opening up to him! and now they're officially friends? haha but really, one of the two needs to stop, meaning John should call off the bet (OHHHH BUT NOOOO, HE'S NOT GONNA DO THAT, IT MAKES FOR A BORING PLOT AND WE BOTH KNOW THAT) or Harlow could stop being so friendly with him! Also, Halvo is being such a dick! He's still totally going for the bet and as I said last time, he's really not gonna be there for Harlow when John breaks her heart.
    June 29th, 2011 at 11:56pm
  • somebody_who_cares

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    Awwww :]
    June 25th, 2011 at 09:04am
  • Karla Reyna

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    Just read the entire story, it´s great. And I love Bright Eyes with all my heart, saw them live and they´re amazing, I was happy when he started singing the song (=
    June 23rd, 2011 at 10:35am
  • ingridkusterbeck

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    This is THE perfect story! Ahhh. :-) Update soon! <3
    June 23rd, 2011 at 04:30am
  • lovelyhope

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    The ending was adorable. Eric's a bit of a douche though since he knows about the bet and is just trying to make Harlow fall for John even harder.
    June 23rd, 2011 at 01:46am
  • Blue Eyes White Lies

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    this is my absolute favorite story. PLEASE make it last!
    June 22nd, 2011 at 03:41am
  • Anthem.

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    this is going to end up horrible. as soon as she he said everything i could hear the "bum bum bum", not good. this chapter was really cute. I want to know what happened to her sister. that makes me really curious. plus, i just love Halvo, but why was he acting like there was nothing going on, like the bet. cannot wait for more. please update soon(:
    June 22nd, 2011 at 02:34am
  • MYP

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    Awww this update was so cute with the lake, but John is dumb for being a liar! But I love how you're showing he's so confused about Harlow. And I love Harlow! She's so cute, and I hope John realizes how amazing she is soon! damn him! Haha.
    Update again soon please!
    June 22nd, 2011 at 12:59am
  • whilethefirewasout

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    Halvo, you liar. As soon as John hurts her, she might actually go to Halvo and then he's probably gonna turn his back on her! I like how John is falling for Harlow, but he should call off the bet before it gets too late since she's definitely falling for him too. She just doesn't know it yet! She really needs to take Aimee's advice to heart because she will get hurt in the end! This chapter was so cute! I loooooove it!
    June 21st, 2011 at 10:09pm
  • thatswhatshesaid0

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    When her sister came out I totally thought she wasn't going to go.
    I hope John asks her out! They're so cute!
    June 21st, 2011 at 09:26pm