Holy man, this is good! I think it would've been better for Harlow if she hadn't had that rant about her family in front of John. And HAHAHAAHA ELENA JUST GOT R-E-J-E-C-T-E-D! IN YO FACE BEEEEEEEEYOTTTTTTCH! I really hope that Harlow has that rant in front of her family later on (yeah when her and John are dating, it's gonna happen and hopefully so will this!) so then she can storm out and then say screw becoming a lawyer then starting her bakery! Then she may or may not find out about the bet so it's gonna be flour to John's face if she does haha. AND JOHN'S A CHEATER HE CHEATED ON THE TEST! I mean, it would've been okay if the test was multiple choice, but I'm gonna make an ass out of you and myself by assuming that it wasn't.
Well it shows that John actually has a conscience since he's feeling bad about the bet but obviously not bad enough to drop it :/ I feel as if he's going to really hurt her when she finds out. I love this story though!
The part with Halvo and John made me laugh so hard, love it! And, of course, the Harlow and John parts make my life! I love them! Harlow is too awesome. And I loved the part at the end, with John actually feeling bad about this bet! Update again soon please!!
Preaching to the choir! I have 3 AP tests and a really important competition the week after. I'm about ready to pull my hair out. Great update by the way. I really hope she finds the "lost John" before he really hurts her :/ Update soon please :)
BEST OF LUCK TO YOU WITH YOUR TESTS! YOU'RE GONNA BE AWEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMEEEEEEEEEEE! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
As for the story, this is GRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEAT! (as Tony the Tiger would say) John is totally starting to like Harlow. Definitely. He's just in denial! He just wants in her pants, but really wants in her head. Harlow is probably a little confused as to why John wants to take her to ice cream, but is excited for it at the same time. I do love this, I really do.
Gosh darn it! You're killing me with the reminder of the bet at the end. It's like everytime I think he's doing something good it snaps you back to where this is all going. But that's why I love this story :) Update ASAP
Ugh, John still has the bet on his mind. One of these days he's gonna fall for her! I mean, I think so hahaha. Plus, he thinks she's pretty and has her thinking that he thinks she's perfect. I just hope that he doesn't broadcast what happens in her house to the school! and you know what, I feel like Elena had an abortion now, OH or she was pregnant then lost it?