I chuckled to myself when I wrote him as Frank rocks - it's probably lame that I made myself laugh... :|
I liked writing the text message tho - and I'm glad you all liked it to ^_^ Scarlet is a big mess right now - but don't worry...stuff will get better (I hope - although since I'm the writer I can make that happen right? Lol!)
I'm trying to keep it realistic as I can...without it getting too soap-opera-y. Hope I'm not doing a bad job at it... xx
This is AWESOME!!! Now I know I'm not completely weird for making Mikey so mean. He's fun to write, cuz he's so different from everyone else. I am happy now. Yay!
Unexpected is a good thing (I hope) - nothing worse than a predictable story eh? :] I'm working on Chapter 4 right now to post - then I'll try and get one or two more up as well. I'm one of those people who tends to write lots in a short time...although I'm writing as I go, and I don't have a lot planned out right now :P
Is there anything you think I need to change or make better at the moment? I know I mess up what tense I'm writing in every-so-often :/
That flashback was unexpected!! From a ten-year-old's view, it was really good though. I had to write something like that once, but not as bad and it was from a boy's point of view (WEIRD) and that was SUPER hard. It scared me. I still can't believe how much you update... You're like a proffesional. I mean professional. Whatever.
Thanks :] I worried that I put in such a big flashback scene so quickly - but if you're all enjoying it then I'm happy with what I've done :]
Thanks for the subscription ^_^ I really really appreciate it! I'm still learning how to use this site, so I'm hoping everything continues smoothly on. I feel bad about not bringing in the guys straight-away - but I felt a bit of a build-up of back-story would be better.
Hey - thank you so much! I'm working on the next chapter as we speak...just to warn you though it's gonna start as a dark one :P My first subscriber...I think that deserves a mention in the A/N ^_^