Give Me a Reason to Believe - Comments

  • blue-and-dark

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    YESSSS! Frankie finally texted her! yayyy! If you think she's a crybaby, my characters are all HORRIBLE.
    March 22nd, 2011 at 09:34pm
  • HarryPotterFreakie

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    this story is really good. Keep writing.

    Mikey Way is sexy...
    March 22nd, 2011 at 06:18pm
  • KyLilly_Kid

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    I chuckled to myself when I wrote him as Frank rocks - it's probably lame that I made myself laugh... :|

    I liked writing the text message tho - and I'm glad you all liked it to ^_^ Scarlet is a big mess right now - but don't worry...stuff will get better (I hope - although since I'm the writer I can make that happen right? Lol!)

    I'm trying to keep it realistic as I can...without it getting too soap-opera-y. Hope I'm not doing a bad job at it... xx
    March 22nd, 2011 at 02:36am
  • blue-and-dark

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    Wait wait wait wait wait wait wait there's a Planetary video?? Am I behind? Ruh-roh, this girl's in a mess. Scarlet i mean, not me.
    March 22nd, 2011 at 02:18am
  • Aimbo

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    Frank's text message made me giggle. He's too damn cute. Poor Scarlet though... I'm glad I made you smile :) You're story inspires me :)
    March 21st, 2011 at 01:23am
  • blue-and-dark

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    Frank Rocks LOL i love him. Yay Awkward Mikey! Oh, the things we do in the name of writing... >:) evil laughter.
    March 20th, 2011 at 10:40pm
  • KyLilly_Kid

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    Thank you sooo, soo much for the comments! They've put a massive smile on my face ^_^
    March 20th, 2011 at 05:18pm
  • Aimbo

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    Wow! This story is amazing. The last person I excpected venom from was Mikey! So many other unexpected things have happened! I love it!

    Kal :)
    March 19th, 2011 at 10:54pm
  • blue-and-dark

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    This is AWESOME!!! Now I know I'm not completely weird for making Mikey so mean. He's fun to write, cuz he's so different from everyone else. I am happy now. Yay!
    March 19th, 2011 at 02:12pm
  • KyLilly_Kid

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    Unexpected is a good thing (I hope) - nothing worse than a predictable story eh? :] I'm working on Chapter 4 right now to post - then I'll try and get one or two more up as well. I'm one of those people who tends to write lots in a short time...although I'm writing as I go, and I don't have a lot planned out right now :P

    Is there anything you think I need to change or make better at the moment? I know I mess up what tense I'm writing in every-so-often :/
    March 18th, 2011 at 09:47pm
  • blue-and-dark

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    That flashback was unexpected!! From a ten-year-old's view, it was really good though. I had to write something like that once, but not as bad and it was from a boy's point of view (WEIRD) and that was SUPER hard. It scared me. I still can't believe how much you update... You're like a proffesional. I mean professional. Whatever.
    March 18th, 2011 at 09:19pm
  • KyLilly_Kid

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    Thanks :] I worried that I put in such a big flashback scene so quickly - but if you're all enjoying it then I'm happy with what I've done :]

    Thanks for the subscription ^_^ I really really appreciate it! I'm still learning how to use this site, so I'm hoping everything continues smoothly on. I feel bad about not bringing in the guys straight-away - but I felt a bit of a build-up of back-story would be better.
    March 17th, 2011 at 11:02pm
  • Girl Division

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    HI!
    I really like this story! it's really good so far; keep up the good work.
    You just got another sub. <3
    xo,Izzy
    March 17th, 2011 at 10:45pm
  • KyLilly_Kid

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    Hey - thank you so much! I'm working on the next chapter as we speak...just to warn you though it's gonna start as a dark one :P My first subscriber...I think that deserves a mention in the A/N ^_^
    March 17th, 2011 at 09:21pm
  • blue-and-dark

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    I'm subscribing because you named it after my favorite song. And dayum, you can WRITE!!
    March 17th, 2011 at 09:19pm