August 16th, 2012 at 12:32am
Light of Things - Comments
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I'm from the comment swap, and I read the first chapter. I've read one chapter about this band from another comment swap so I still don't really know anything about this band. The grammar and spelling is good. But I was easily confused. Maybe it's the fact that I don't know anything about the band, or that I didn't read the summary, but I was confused. I knew it was a kidnapping fanfic from the first two paragraphs. I don't understand her wanting to do anything with him but other then that, it's good! Keep up the good work!August 15th, 2012 at 08:44pm
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Okay, so I was gonna wait until I'd read further before I commented, but I didn't want you to have to wait any longer for my comment. I've read a couple A7X kidnap fics, but this one is a little different considering how early in she falls for him. I like the fact that the grammar is good so it makes it easir to read and the writing is goo although at the beginning there's a few people who i have no idea who you're talking about. But overall it's just a really good story. And it gets bonus points for being about a band I like :)June 13th, 2012 at 06:26am
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:) just found this story and I love it...... :)March 27th, 2012 at 08:23am
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So I just read everything I missed out on!! It's grown so much! :D and only TEN chapters from the END?! :(February 23rd, 2012 at 03:26am
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I'm very sorry I haven't been on to read and comment!! :( I haven't been on in 3 months. I'm going to read it all now!! I hope I've been introduced :)February 23rd, 2012 at 01:14am
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great update and AWESOME pic of Matt and his family. it's too adorable =)February 12th, 2012 at 01:57pm
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oh my goodness!!! just found this story today and I'm in love!!!! please tell me she says yes! and please update soon =)February 1st, 2012 at 03:56am
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oh what is she going to tell him please more soonJanuary 24th, 2012 at 01:13am
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more soon
she was bleeding??
poor matt he has to try to recover herDecember 30th, 2011 at 12:50am -
Aw, I loved it! :)
I swear, I will rip Shay... or Shey... to pieces if he does anything.July 17th, 2011 at 06:50am -
More I love it so muchJuly 11th, 2011 at 05:01am
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Awh, that was cute. :) I can't wait until I come into the story!July 7th, 2011 at 07:42am
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YAY! I was so excited when I saw that you had finally updated! :D I swear, I'm like your biggest fan with this story. xDJune 28th, 2011 at 07:32am
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update soon so goodJune 26th, 2011 at 12:09am
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I miss this story. :(June 8th, 2011 at 10:28pm
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Updaaaaaatttteeee!!! DxMay 25th, 2011 at 08:47am
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oh my goodness update now please please pleaseMay 7th, 2011 at 06:18am
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Eeeeeeek! I loved it. Very depressing, but also very good. I'm so proud of Matt for getting out of that situation at the end!May 7th, 2011 at 05:44am
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loved the update cant wait for the next oneApril 25th, 2011 at 10:14am
Google his name and I'm sure you'll understand why she would want to do anything with him
still thanks for reading.