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  • xX.Roseanna.Xx

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    @ JuliaMadelyn

    Google his name and I'm sure you'll understand why she would want to do anything with him Wink
    still thanks for reading.
    August 16th, 2012 at 12:32am
  • JuliaMadelyn

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    I'm from the comment swap, and I read the first chapter. I've read one chapter about this band from another comment swap so I still don't really know anything about this band. The grammar and spelling is good. But I was easily confused. Maybe it's the fact that I don't know anything about the band, or that I didn't read the summary, but I was confused. I knew it was a kidnapping fanfic from the first two paragraphs. I don't understand her wanting to do anything with him but other then that, it's good! Keep up the good work!
    August 15th, 2012 at 08:44pm
  • TheWh0rr0r

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    Okay, so I was gonna wait until I'd read further before I commented, but I didn't want you to have to wait any longer for my comment. I've read a couple A7X kidnap fics, but this one is a little different considering how early in she falls for him. I like the fact that the grammar is good so it makes it easir to read and the writing is goo although at the beginning there's a few people who i have no idea who you're talking about. But overall it's just a really good story. And it gets bonus points for being about a band I like :)
    June 13th, 2012 at 06:26am
  • bonitalita

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    :) just found this story and I love it...... :)
    March 27th, 2012 at 08:23am
  • Ayla Gates

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    So I just read everything I missed out on!! It's grown so much! :D and only TEN chapters from the END?! :(
    February 23rd, 2012 at 03:26am
  • Ayla Gates

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    I'm very sorry I haven't been on to read and comment!! :( I haven't been on in 3 months. I'm going to read it all now!! I hope I've been introduced :)
    February 23rd, 2012 at 01:14am
  • LittleMissRESENTMENT

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    great update and AWESOME pic of Matt and his family. it's too adorable =)
    February 12th, 2012 at 01:57pm
  • LittleMissRESENTMENT

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    oh my goodness!!! just found this story today and I'm in love!!!! please tell me she says yes! and please update soon =)
    February 1st, 2012 at 03:56am
  • lizicea7x

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    oh what is she going to tell him please more soon
    January 24th, 2012 at 01:13am
  • lizicea7x

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    more soon
    she was bleeding??
    poor matt he has to try to recover her
    December 30th, 2011 at 12:50am
  • Ayla Gates

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    Aw, I loved it! :)
    I swear, I will rip Shay... or Shey... to pieces if he does anything.
    July 17th, 2011 at 06:50am
  • Star Angel

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    More I love it so much
    July 11th, 2011 at 05:01am
  • Ayla Gates

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    Awh, that was cute. :) I can't wait until I come into the story!
    July 7th, 2011 at 07:42am
  • Ayla Gates

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    YAY! I was so excited when I saw that you had finally updated! :D I swear, I'm like your biggest fan with this story. xD
    June 28th, 2011 at 07:32am
  • Star Angel

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    update soon so good
    June 26th, 2011 at 12:09am
  • Ayla Gates

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    I miss this story. :(
    June 8th, 2011 at 10:28pm
  • Adie Delonge

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    Updaaaaaatttteeee!!! Dx
    May 25th, 2011 at 08:47am
  • Star Angel

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    oh my goodness update now please please please
    May 7th, 2011 at 06:18am
  • Ayla Gates

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    Eeeeeeek! I loved it. Very depressing, but also very good. I'm so proud of Matt for getting out of that situation at the end!
    May 7th, 2011 at 05:44am
  • shadows vengeance

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    loved the update cant wait for the next one
    April 25th, 2011 at 10:14am
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